I DL'd out of curiosity. I'm immediately soft-locked in the main menu? How do you even do that?
If you open the game, go to preferences to turn down the blaring music, then right click, you can't get back to the main menu. Nice.
I get that this is one of those "stop hitting enter" type moments, but the ability to close out of the menu with right click is BUILT IN to renpy. You don't need to add that to the pause menu, which is the only thing I can possibly think is happening here.
And there's a poorly chromakeyed woman that greets you as soon as you get around to clicking start. Which is also defaulted to Thai, when everything up until that moment was all in English.
You REALLY need to polish this out. I get you're just starting out but UX is hard to break in Renpy and you're doing that right now. Course correct and iron this stuff out before saying "Eh, I'll get to it later" is 6, 12, 18 releases in.