- Jul 25, 2018
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I just finished the current version and I'm mostly impressed. Interesting introduction to the plot, excellent pace, beautiful characters with varied personalities and gorgeous visuals with great use of lighting and camera angles.
The big problem I have with it is the poor grammar everywhere. At this point I've stopped expecting people to even do simple things like using the correct form of "its" or "it's" but this VN also keeps flip-flopping between present and past tense in the narration. It's very distracting. Pick one and stick with it.
Even with the blatant issues with the english language, this is looking great.
The big problem I have with it is the poor grammar everywhere. At this point I've stopped expecting people to even do simple things like using the correct form of "its" or "it's" but this VN also keeps flip-flopping between present and past tense in the narration. It's very distracting. Pick one and stick with it.
Even with the blatant issues with the english language, this is looking great.