I don't know why I clicked on this since I'm not the target audience (I'm gay. I think I just like the old time photographs of the guys), but I liked it. Kind of like a romance novel with porn clips. could use a few choices here and there to feel more interactive.
I achieved to get to the end of chapter 1, and allmost fell asleep by then. This is not a game, but a very boring tale. At least not my cup of tea.... I hope there are others that like your creation better than me. Good luck!