VN Ren'Py The Magus [v1] [Mr. UnOriginal]

[aochung]

A question for the dev. Do you really find this creature attractive?

Personally, Yes. She reminds me of my first GF.

Am I missing something that makes her unattractive?

 

[furball8994]

Start looks promising. My only suggestion is to put a save warning at the end...

 

[LongDongAlex]

Trying to run it on Linux and I get (after fixing file permissions):

The_Magus/The Magus/renpy.py': [Errno 2] No such file or directory

 

[joryh]

Gotta love preview 6. 4 different meals. No utensils in sight. Even soup is finger food.

 

[joryh]

Your giving a Dev with no background in game development a hard time for a render that is better than most of the cartoonish, anime, hand drawn characters in other games? There is a learning curve with rendering and all other aspects of creating a VN. Do you also criticize babies for not pronouncing words correctly? Give the Dev some time to improve or just move on.

I was more like. Anyone running down stairs with arms outstretched like that is asking to find out if gravity works. I do, however, criticize adults for using your instead of you're.

 

[onefingersalute]

hmm will check this out seems interesting

 

[OhGodNotAgain]

4 sisters!? real or step? harem? ntr/sharing? pregnancy?

 

[Chimba]

But are they the MC's actual sisters or just the daughters of the adoptive parents (=stepsisters)? Did the missing parents adopt them all or just the MC? Reason I ask is to me (and most others) stepcest doesn't count as incest if they are not blood related. Usually I don't dl first (or sometimes even the update after) releases as these days as more often than not they get abandoned anyway but if it's stepcest I'd rather not waste my time even then.

I mean, for that reason IMPO i say that the game needs a better introduction, because there is no real introduction with the characters, but at the moment as far as I play, it seems that they are all real sisters, or at least for now they don't refer to the Mc as "step-brother" (I don't count step-shit as incest neither .)

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[CoffeeSaint]

3dcg, male protagonist, milf, incest, voyeurism, monster, fantasy, big ass, big tits, teasing,

I believe the Horror Tag is missing…


yeap: it's definitely missing:



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Godspeed with your project, Mr. UnOriginal;
thanks for sharing it.

cheers.

 

[THE KILLER 13]

What's the reason for this incest tag, considering MC's sisters are just adopted?

Apparently the parents adopted the 5

 

[Anaktorness]

stepcest is as bad as ntr
stepcest=
Incest=

 

[furball8994]

The char intros either suck or are nonexistent so it's unknown if they are blood related or not (though in my personal opinion it's rather rare for a couple to adopt 5 kids all at once so my first guess is they just adopted the mc (=stepcrap).

The only reference to "step" or "adoptive" is the one mention in the description in the OP. In the game they refer to each other as sis, bro, big sister, big brother and parents. The Dev has a patreon page and needs to watch gow things are worded. At least they are not "landlords & tenants".

 

[Spyderwraith]

You need a "and thats all folks save here" screen badly

 

[Before I Forget]

Your giving a Dev with no background in game development a hard time for a render that is better than most of the cartoonish, anime, hand drawn characters in other games? There is a learning curve with rendering and all other aspects of creating a VN. Do you also criticize babies for not pronouncing words correctly? Give the Dev some time to improve or just move on.

She doesn't even look that bad of a model, I've seen much worse.

 

[gojira667]

Trying to run it on Linux and I get (after fixing file permissions):

The_Magus/The Magus/renpy.py': [Errno 2] No such file or directory

Rename The Magus/lib/py3-linux-x86_64/renpy to The Magus/lib/py3-linux-x86_64/The Magus. Or the other way around. The names need to match.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Why do the images scale down all of a sudden?


Here's a cleaned-up script.

 

[korochan48]

I understand about the renders not consistent cause dev is new to this and still learning. I just hate the pretentious narrator dialogue and some mc thoughts over exaggerated.

 

[Dripping]

I understand about the renders not consistent cause dev is new to this and still learning. I just hate the pretentious narrator dialogue and some mc thoughts over exaggerated.

Not sure I'd call it pretentious, but the narration does seem to be a bit too official and too descriptive/elaborate. I dunno, it all just doesn't "flow". This style of writing might fit (somewhat) to a noir detective novel, but it just doesn't seem to fit a VN.

 

[vs2011xyz]

Android apk pls.

 

[Sylaann]

View attachment 3221042 Why do the images scale down all of a sudden?


Here's a cleaned-up script.

I doesn't fix the issue, but I'm also wondering why it went from 16:9 to 4:3.

Fix this please dev.