If the Dev can clarify the MMF. Like who it's gonna involve and stuff. I don't like sharing the main girls. If they are side girls, that might be okay, but otherwise everything else looks really good! I'm also asking cause there are more men in the preview images than I'm used to
The art looks unique, minus the one Avaron mentioned, it looks good
Despite the fact that we can't name ourselves, the dialog was just getting cringier as story went on. They should consider playing more games here instead of continuing to develop this game. It may help increase the MC's testosterone level
There appear to be another game with the same title as this one. Just noticed this because that game was just updated and saw it on
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whose screenshots didn't match those posted here, hence the confusion. So I checked by searching the Latest Updates on F95zone site and indeed it turned out there is another game with same title. Just letting you know about this but it is up to you to decide on whether to keep the title as it is or change it to avoid confusion.
It seems interesting, there are things that in the art that bugs me but i can tolerate... But particularly this image... I'm not an expert nor an artist myself... But it seems like the position of her head in correspondence to her body and from she is looking it makes me see her as if she had her neck broken.
If include voyeurism, this thread must deal later with the NTR dumbest "fans" (and with the detractors with sensible skin as well) who doesn't known the differences.
It's always good when the devs are fully honest, so there aren't complainings later.
All of the faces look like they were drawn separately from the bodies and copy-pasted on. This is the biggest offender because the angle of the skull and face don't match.
I am the artist of the team. Since nearly all complaints are about art, I decided to create an account to discuss further and apologize. I am really terribly sorry to you guys for this visual discomfort and to my fellow team members for causing this bad experience. Now I was analyzing my reference picture and indeed I structured the head wrong. It should have done it 3\4 view. We had several design changes etc. during the production so we had to see these pictures many times that I assume our head start to see it normal. The faces were added later than the body so they were drawn on a bigger canvas and slightly more detailed than the body layer which is more painterly, rough brush strokes. I will redraw&polish all assets and scenes that creates problem so please let me know. If team want I can leave the team as well and they can change artists.
I started a new sketch since the reference pose started to creep me after that exorcism comment. it is like this
I hope this pose is not cursed as well.
I haven't seen this game but looking at screenshots I think you are right, especially the clock part and brown&yellow color dominated. Since its late Victorian aesthetic I thought clock would be good to indicate time and its popular concept so I don't think its an issue. However if dev decides to change it I don't mind to redraw.
There appear to be another game with the same title as this one. Just noticed this because that game was just updated and saw it on
You must be registered to see the links
whose screenshots didn't match those posted here, hence the confusion. So I checked by searching the Latest Updates on F95zone site and indeed it turned out there is another game with same title. Just letting you know about this but it is up to you to decide on whether to keep the title as it is or change it to avoid confusion.
Last time we checked there weren't a game like this but its released newly as well. Since game production is not a fast event it is quite funny we thought the same thing at same times. We will probably change it to Mansion of Griffith and I will redraw logo etc.
If the Dev can clarify the MMF. Like who it's gonna involve and stuff. I don't like sharing the main girls. If they are side girls, that might be okay, but otherwise everything else looks really good!
What if mmf is used for amelia pegs both ernest and count scene? Jokes aside as we stated all adult scenes will be optional. So you won't see anything you don't want to see and it is not just hiding that scenes more like different route. I assume it is more part of voyeurism since there is also lesbian in planned tags even though mc is male.
The dev ratgirl will answer this question more accurate and detailed in her free time.
The first chapter is more like introduction to game so it is more story focused. In the next chapters there will be plenty girls. There are more planned girl than the banner.
I just googled him and I don't think he looks like him except hair part. His eyes are closer, The distance between eyebrows and eyes are bigger and he has pretty big noticeable eyelids. His nose is sharper and his chin is more forward I think. I always thought MC looks like manhwa cover males. But I can be wrong since I didn't notice that headturn, I won't justify myself.
And again I am sorry for causing this bad first impression. If you guys give me a chance I will improve my skills.
What if mmf is used for amelia pegs both ernest and count scene? Jokes aside as we stated all adult scenes will be optional. So you won't see anything you don't want to see and it is not just hiding that scenes more like different route. I assume it is more part of voyeurism since there is also lesbian in planned tags even though mc is male.
The dev @ratgirl will answer this question more accurate and detailed in her free time.
I don't mind if it is optional or not, I don't play games with such content anymore, it has nothing to do with you guys or anything, just make sure to add those tags in planned as you did on patreon so people that feel this way know.
Good luck with the game.
I am the artist of the team. Since nearly all complaints are about art, I decided to create an account to discuss further and apologize. I am really terribly sorry to you guys for this visual discomfort and to my fellow team members for causing this bad experience. Now I was analyzing my reference picture and indeed I structured the head wrong. It should have done it 3\4 view. We had several design changes etc. during the production so we had to see these pictures many times that I assume our head start to see it normal. The faces were added later than the body so they were drawn on a bigger canvas and slightly more detailed than the body layer which is more painterly, rough brush strokes. I will redraw&polish all assets and scenes that creates problem so please let me know. If team want I can leave the team as well and they can change artists.
I started a new sketch since the reference pose started to creep me after that exorcism comment. it is like this View attachment 2026246
I hope this pose is not cursed as well.
I haven't seen this game but looking at screenshots I think you are right, especially the clock part and brown&yellow color dominated. Since its late Victorian aesthetic I thought clock would be good to indicate time and its popular concept so I don't think its an issue. However if dev decides to change it I don't mind to redraw.
Last time we checked there weren't a game like this but its released newly as well. Since game production is not a fast event it is quite funny we thought the same thing at same times. We will probably change it to Mansion of Griffith and I will redraw logo etc.
What if mmf is used for amelia pegs both ernest and count scene? Jokes aside as we stated all adult scenes will be optional. So you won't see anything you don't want to see and it is not just hiding that scenes more like different route. I assume it is more part of voyeurism since there is also lesbian in planned tags even though mc is male.
The dev ratgirl will answer this question more accurate and detailed in her free time.
The first chapter is more like introduction to game so it is more story focused. In the next chapters there will be plenty girls. There are more planned girl than the banner.
I just googled him and I don't think he looks like him except hair part. His eyes are closer, The distance between eyebrows and eyes are bigger and he has pretty big noticeable eyelids. His nose is sharper and his chin is more forward I think. I always thought MC looks like manhwa cover males. But I can be wrong since I didn't notice that headturn, I won't justify myself.
And again I am sorry for causing this bad first impression. If you guys give me a chance I will improve my skills.
I just want you to know that you don't have to explain anything to us. Your art is beautiful, I was more talking about the one image and you explained it really well. It's really not a big deal when you make characters THAT good looking. I was trying to give you a private message, but you seem to have restricted it. Regardless, I'm looking forward to what you can do. I only asked about MMF because it's something the irks me, but it doesn't stop me from playing it. I just wanted to know how avoidable it was and who it was for. I tend to not like Main girls being involved in that stuff. That's just me though.
You and ratgirl do what you want and keep the great art coming
I am the artist of the team. Since nearly all complaints are about art, I decided to create an account to discuss further and apologize. I am really terribly sorry to you guys for this visual discomfort and to my fellow team members for causing this bad experience. Now I was analyzing my reference picture and indeed I structured the head wrong. It should have done it 3\4 view. We had several design changes etc. during the production so we had to see these pictures many times that I assume our head start to see it normal. The faces were added later than the body so they were drawn on a bigger canvas and slightly more detailed than the body layer which is more painterly, rough brush strokes. I will redraw&polish all assets and scenes that creates problem so please let me know. If team want I can leave the team as well and they can change artists.
I started a new sketch since the reference pose started to creep me after that exorcism comment. it is like this
And again I am sorry for causing this bad first impression. If you guys give me a chance I will improve my skills.
Nothing personal meant, and don't feel like you need to leave. Your art overall is very good, packs of forumites (including myself) just like to laugh at whatever's laugh-worthy. Full respect for owning up to what doesn't work and setting out to improve it!
It seems interesting, there are things that in the art that bugs me but i can tolerate... But particularly this image... I'm not an expert nor an artist myself... But it seems like the position of her head in correspondence to her body and from she is looking it makes me see her as if she had her neck broken.
If include voyeurism, this thread must deal later with the NTR dumbest "fans" (and with the detractors with sensible skin as well) who doesn't known the differences.
It's always good when the devs are fully honest, so there aren't complainings later.
You guys must be joking. I even posed for that draw. Do some yoga and get flexibility. Your neck must be as hard as rock for sitting hours in front of pc.
Despite the fact that we can't name ourselves, the dialog was just getting cringier as story went on. They should consider playing more games here instead of continuing to develop this game. It may help increase the MC's testosterone level
My Mc has enough testosterone not to fuck every woman he just met Lol. Look at yourself
Actually one of the game's tag is corruption and Mc will not be the same as he is at the start.
If You don't have any sense of humour to get my dialogues, run away cause they will increase.
I just want you to know that you don't have to explain anything to us. Your art is beautiful, I was more talking about the one image and you explained it really well. It's really not a big deal when you make characters THAT good looking. I was trying to give you a private message, but you seem to have restricted it. Regardless, I'm looking forward to what you can do. I only asked about MMF because it's something the irks me, but it doesn't stop me from playing it. I just wanted to know how avoidable it was and who it was for. I tend to not like Main girls being involved in that stuff. That's just me though.
You and ratgirl do what you want and keep the great art coming
Thank you so much, I believe everyone's opinion matter, some people can see what we can't see, I should be always open to critics and improve myself. I am glad you find my art beautiful, you even exaggerate it. We hope to see you in next chapters I hope we won't dissapoint you and all our players. I opened my pms, feel free to message.
Nothing personal meant, and don't feel like you need to leave. Your art overall is very good, packs of forumites (including myself) just like to laugh at whatever's laugh-worthy. Full respect for owning up to what doesn't work and setting out to improve it!
Thank you
When everyone pointed out the same mistake I felt I caused the team player loss, which I probably did, but at least some people find it attractive.
I redrawn it. At least I hope so. I tried to be fast to not scare away more people from the game. I tried to upload redrawn version here but it keeps telling something is wrong so dev uploaded it on patreon. It is a public post. Does it look ok? If not where looks weird?
Thank you for reading
I redrawn it. At least I hope so. I tried to be fast to not scare away more people from the game. I tried to upload redrawn version here but it keeps telling something is wrong so dev uploaded it on patreon. It is a public post. Does it look ok? If not where looks weird?
Thank you for reading
No offense intended, it was just a light hearted comment of my first reaction from the thumbnail. You're off to a great start, keep it up and good luck to you and your project!
I'm also asking cause there are more men in the preview images than I'm used to 
