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heretic1
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I don't know about the game, but these:
..are the best boobs EVER!
..are the best boobs EVER!
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The idea is interesting, but the plot lacks coherence and spice. The game would have been pretty hot if the developer had spent a little more time building suspense in the scenes and emotional progression between them. It's still interesting to see what happens next, but the plot feels third-rate. 
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Sounds like you're assuming much of a plot is intended to begin with. This isn't meant to be any kind of heavy storytelling VN like A Father's Sins is. This is, on purpose, practically the polar opposite of that. This is also meant to be primarily a corruption game, not really a romantic, building lovey-dovey relationships game.The idea is interesting, but the plot lacks coherence and spice. The game would have been pretty hot if the developer had spent a little more time building suspense in the scenes and emotional progression between them. It's still interesting to see what happens next, but the plot feels third-rate.
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No. I mean, the MC, without any doubts of a second thought, tells his daughter: If you want to be a model, take your clothes off and suck my dick. And she's like, okay! There's no preamble, no buildup, no elaborate motivation.
This isn't corruption, it's bad absurdist comedy. I just wish the plot were more thoughtful and believable.
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Meh. You're incredibly oversimplifying things. He doesn't just say that out of the blue and it happens. The motivation is explicitly stated, multiple times: to be edgier and become a model. Cecelia even says that's what she wants specifically; and Sophia says she wants to become a film star, with modeling as a way to reach that goal. The MC is a man with experience working on fashion photo shoots, and apparently also has experience convincing women to "push boundaries" to get noticed and become more successful. (He shows multiple videos demonstrating models on shoots doing just that.)
So, he applies that same logic here: color outside the lines so you'll get noticed; get more sexual so you'll make it bigger; lose your notion of boundaries to establish a future career. And let's be honest. Cecelia and Sophia are neither the sharpest crayons in the box nor the totally innocent girls they pretend to be. The MC is just convincing them that they don't need to be guarded with him and that they should be provocative to be successful. The girls' greed also is meant to be a major factor in their willingness to give in (which is why it shows up in summaries at the end of each day).
If Cecelia and the MC have known each other for a long time, it's also not as ludicrous as you make it sound. You don't think the MC would understand what motivates her and play to that? You don't think the MC understands how her mind works and so says things that sound logical to her? This doesn't have to be your cup of tea, but it's also not as absurd as you're presenting it. Food for thought for the dev, though, for sure. But again, this isn't meant to have a "thoughtful and believable" plot: this is meant to be a silly, quick-and-dirty fap game.
Wow. And I was going for "dude corrupts two young women with lots of FAP scenes".
And maybe his two neighbors also.
And maybe his two neighbors also.
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She's not his daughter, she simply lives with him. She's his... ex-girlfriend's kid from another dude? I don't know and it's not part of the story, perhaps the future will tell.
Life is full of mysteries.
Like why Hulk always explodes all his clothes EXCEPT for his pants. Which somehow always get transformed into a tattered pair of britches while rest of his attire disintegrates when he supersizes.
Hey, it is what it is. I understand and can appreciate that you enjoy more "realistic" stories, but not everyone wants to read War and Peace before getting to the good bits.
Have you tried A Father's Sins?
She's modeled after my university GF.I don't know about the game, but these:
..are the best boobs EVER!
I wonder what she looks like now?
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IMO:
1. straight up rape in games is very rarely hot, almost never
2. corruption, where a girl is getting progressively more and more depraved, is much more often very hot
3. tricking her into performing progressively more depraved things while she remains completely oblivious to it and thinks that it is all just normal, that that is what you are supposed to do - smoking, sizzling, burning, flaming, scorching hot!
I believe that no one has mastered the 3rd kind of game more or better than Partedes, but this game has certain notes to it that give a similar kind of thrill.
1. straight up rape in games is very rarely hot, almost never
2. corruption, where a girl is getting progressively more and more depraved, is much more often very hot
3. tricking her into performing progressively more depraved things while she remains completely oblivious to it and thinks that it is all just normal, that that is what you are supposed to do - smoking, sizzling, burning, flaming, scorching hot!
I believe that no one has mastered the 3rd kind of game more or better than Partedes, but this game has certain notes to it that give a similar kind of thrill.
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You both completely misunderstood me. I could explain in more detail, but it would be a wall of text, and it would be useless anyway. If the DEV thinks his story is good, so be it. I'm not saying the story itself is bad. If that were the case, I wouldn't bother commenting. I like it. I just think it could be hotter and more fun, with the right skill.
I think do understand. And I agree the game would have been better if there was more character background material and a more believable story.
I've already tried to creating the kind of game that I think would make a fantastic TV series (A Father's Sins) . But the simple truth is that it doesn't appeal to as many players as a fap game with tons of lewd scenes.
AFS was my attempt at a big, complicated story game. TMM is me trying to create something that the fap crowd can really get into.
What's done is done and now set in concrete, but I can change my plans for future updates. Have anything particular in mind?
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I didn't find anything interesting in AFS for myself. But I also don't understand why everyone believes in the false dichotomy between plot and pornography. In my opinion, there's no fundamental obstacle to making a game with a rich plot and lots of sex.
Anyway, I sincerely hope that both you and the audience enjoy TMM. And no, I don't have anything particular to suggest. If you'd like, I can share some general advice on literary theory and fine art (the visuals of your game are also far from ideal), but only if you truly believe you need such advice. I wouldn't want to waste my energy on this if it won't benefit you.
didn't know that, first time downloading, and it was censort, looking to have been paywalled.
for me that was instand ignore, glad i checked back to see if there was any update.
thank you for this information.
i wasnt trolling.
i already receaved information that the uncencor patch will be at a later date.
first time downloader, seeing it cencort got me te be buyest to place it in the paywalled catagorie.
as that was my first time experiance with the game.
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