Decent start. I want to point on strengths first. Dialogues feels alive thats a plus also some scenes have good cinematography. LI's kinda cute i dont have any problem with any of them yet too early to judge their personalities tho . I like Alice and Hannah the most. On other hand , MC personality is like shifting from rude prick to wise old man to horny teenager its not believable not after what happened to his family and may be this issue will be adressed in the future. And u def should work on lighting its really dragging experience down. Overall i enjoyed your game and ill keep following this project. Ty 4 your work.