suggestions
-more opaque hands on girls in minigame
-slightly --- a tiny bit --- darker flushing
-they need to react with facial expression when spanked, and ass red
-there should be a hickey element as part of the light exhibitionism theme
-At least once you've already done an action in the minigame, it shouldn't require a formal explicit question in future sessions. Oni's game had it right with nonverbal cues. I would say for most lower-level actions, don't even use formal verbal requests at all - maybe interrupt the action before it starts with pushing away or a negative expression if she doesn't want it, and reduce lust. There's far, far too much talking, even considering autism of playerbase
same with changing poses - should be able to position them yourself, without saying 'stand back up for me', is very silly
'you push her down onto her back' 'you take her hand, and guide her back up' etc etc. Could read some ao3 smut for this stuff
-showering should remove her wetness
I like this art