- Thread starter Gon D. Eser
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- Mar 22, 2020
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Just like with almost every submission, if the renders and roi animation are sweet, the dialog is horrendous...like it is here.
The language translation is only part of the issue though, since it's clear nobody have shown the Devs what a Thesorasus is or how to use one, it's like they find a word and HAVE to use it...in every sentence...sometimes repeatedly IN that sentence.
One of the more annoying repetitive use of words was "Fuck".
In one paragraph it was used SEVEN TIMES in various iterations, which made it sound like a grade-schooler wrote it lol.
He has Magic Power, and that Magic Power is Powerful for his Magic, that he cannot contain that Magic Power, I have Magic Power and the Master has Magic Power, so we know you have Magic Power...
Just post an ad on here looking for someone to donate their time to do a once-over with the script and iron out the huge errors.
If I had a crash course in editing dialog, I would simply do it myself.
The language translation is only part of the issue though, since it's clear nobody have shown the Devs what a Thesorasus is or how to use one, it's like they find a word and HAVE to use it...in every sentence...sometimes repeatedly IN that sentence.
One of the more annoying repetitive use of words was "Fuck".
In one paragraph it was used SEVEN TIMES in various iterations, which made it sound like a grade-schooler wrote it lol.
He has Magic Power, and that Magic Power is Powerful for his Magic, that he cannot contain that Magic Power, I have Magic Power and the Master has Magic Power, so we know you have Magic Power...
Just post an ad on here looking for someone to donate their time to do a once-over with the script and iron out the huge errors.
If I had a crash course in editing dialog, I would simply do it myself.
Ha. This is possibility a cultural thing. Fuck has so many different definitions I can put seven fucks and motherfuckers in one sentence, possibly with distinct usages. And, I was out of grade school when Dennis Leary released the song "usage of the word fuck."
I'm not disagreeing with you point in general, but the "fuck" example was fucking hilarious for a sisterfucking fuck game.
- Dec 23, 2019
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Alright I have had enough of this increasingly horrible dialog.
I find I am skipping through every scene just to avoid the "Who are you really is" bullshiit.
With the need to explain things three times in a row, having needless conversations repeating what has already been said.
It feels like the writer literally forgets what he JUST typed out.
I might check back in about a year to see if the English language here is isn't being gang-raped anymore.
I find I am skipping through every scene just to avoid the "Who are you really is" bullshiit.
With the need to explain things three times in a row, having needless conversations repeating what has already been said.
It feels like the writer literally forgets what he JUST typed out.
I might check back in about a year to see if the English language here is isn't being gang-raped anymore.
- Aug 9, 2022
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It's so ridiculous it's actually funny, i just turn my brain off and enjoy, the female models are nice tho, their breast and butt looks nice but that's all, the storyline is so so but it's not bad tho it's just one of those low quality, I've played worse so this one is okay if i do say so myself, just don't pay attention to story.
- Aug 18, 2018
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- Aug 11, 2021
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Thanks for it ,, probably will not play but it is nice of you to port games