Ren'Py Abandoned The Pale Orc [v0.5] [Norden Ber]

[RedPillBlues]

Hopefully we get the ability to rename the MC soon.

 

[MoustachGracias]

 

[Sonico]

Nice art, let's see how it turns out in a few versions.

 

[Emperor of HUGE TITTIES]

M3ntir , TNVL enjoy !

Thanks boi!

 

[meigame]

I like to have the back up with mouse wheel option, can't think of a rwason not to have it and I understand it is a standard feature in renpy. plan to enable it?

 

[T00RuN]

I liked

 

[Monsaic]

Way too much text for way too less action yet

 

[Malcowitz]

This is a very promising start! You have very good art direction, some quick progression for a 0.1 and writing that manages the right side of amusing without being irritating or smug. The setting is novel enough without requiring huge amounts of backstory and the setup definitely is something I see working.

Highly look forward to seeing more.

 

[carrotcake000]

damn, this looks cool...imma try it out

 

[myuhinny]

Saiaxs

You need to use either UNREN or enable dev mode renpy to extract the game files and then open notepad and look at the .rpy files. Some have a character.rpy file some place the character names in the script.rpy file.

Drag and drop the .rpy file onto notepads screen and use the find option to search for the name and change it and then select file - save as - change save as type to - all files and then select the rpy file and overwrite it.

Some use the MC/FC name in their dialouge so you can use the find - replace - put name or word you are searching for and in - replace add the name or word you want to change it to - you can then use the replace all or - if their name is used in triggers that pull up scenes and stuff you'll have to manually hit replace or find next if it's one that you can't change.

 

[Zar]

Seems like a lot of the "the"'s are missing? Almost every time you use a common noun to describe someone you are missing the "the" that goes before it ('the greenskins' 'the boy' 'the blond chief' and so on)

 

[Musou_Tensei]

Haven't played it, but the idea alone is a 10/10

 

[allinon]

That orc... Is sexy..To say the least.. Gonna have to try

 

[yaelf513]

Monstergirls and Human relations are my fetish, I will be keeping my eye on this one even if I don't personally care for orcs.

 

[Odin Eye Patch]

yes yes and yes and more yes damn this was a nice surprise good first update lots of interesting characters and a story ive never seen before keeping this on my watch list

 

[DrWho8248]

(+) Good Smorth Art Style
(-) Short
(-) Not Contain Fap-Fap
(-) Story is... Well, i wanna say it can be better...

 

[Zar]

Best game 2020, that coder looks like a handsome fella too.

A few things about the code, from a players perspective (some of these might be more about gameplay then code, I know)
1: Taking away both rollback and "history" means no chance of recovering if you accidentally skip over a line too fast.
2: The randomization seems a bit unfortunate, randomizing how much currency you get for doing an action feels more like a punishment to the player when the roll low, than a victory when they roll high, and "reward" scenes being random before the player has been though all of them is a waste, since the player might stop once they get a repeat (oh, I've seen that before, that must mean I've seen all the scenes now).
3: Save and load limitations; in a porn game, this is usually either a sign your game is too hard (you have to prevent savescumming) or that your code is messy (the game breaks if you load at the wrong time). Currently the game has one sexy scene, but because of the save limitations, I'm not going to bother go back to it, before a save-breaking-update forces me to play the game from the start again. Also, no quickly starting the game to rewatch your favorite scenes once the game is longer is a bit sad given how good the art is.

Unrelated to the code, a quick introduction to earning and spending currency (the flag thingy) would be welcome.

 

[Turdburglerr]

The protagonist looks like a young gay shaggy from scooby doo. If that was the look you was going for then I gotta say you nailed it.

 

[FatDragonite]

Love this game so far!

 

[Strados]

Honestly like most other people I just downloaded the game for fun sexy orc time but I really like the dialogue and the characters. Reading the text in some weird Shakespearian voice just adds to the fun for some reason.