VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Personal Assistant [v0.25c] [JL Creation]

I'll give it max score to encourage dev if he sees it. So far the game looks much better than most games here. Just keep up and after 2/3 updates you'll get to top 50 games on here. There is one game breaking bug with this dancing scene (sometimes doesn't trigger) but beside that game is pretty good. Very pervy I like that

So far this is exactly what I want from a corruption game. She's cute as a button. The MC is 'a bit' revolting but i suppose that is just the angle the author is going for.
But its the slow molding of the girl into the perfect toy which is exceptional, its not even as grindy as some games can be.

another great corruptin game , great story , descent grind, very nice model(s), i really hope to continue grow , and add other staff, the game is great and has a potential to be one of the greatest , great job dev, i really hope to continue your hard work , your game is awsome

sorry for my mad english

Currently the best corruption game i've ever played.

The corruption story route is top notch, the renders are excellent, and the music is good. Its also not that grindy anymore unlike on early releases which is a very good thing.
Can't wait for the next update!

One of the best corruption games I ever played. Super cute girl, great renders and a good balanced grinding system that makes you want to play more. The love route has pretty much no content but the corruption path is totally worth playing. Great game and totally underrated in my opinion.

A game that has a lot of potential!

As many have said before, the MC reminds me of a big toad. But you're not here to admire a toad (MC) but the babe/babes, and damn she is cute!

Renders(3,5/5): Actually quite good, better than many starters. But of course still has some improvements, like some pictures have finished with 40% rendered. Wet skin texture looks awful.

Storyline(5/5): Something fresh and non mainstream is always good! It proves a brave dev with innovation. I'm eager to see what MC plans for Rachel.

Gameplay(4/5): Shows simplicity before styling and confusion, "can I click here? maybe here? or there?".
One big improvement is a good hintsystem for player, which make walk-through unnecessary.
Not too much grindy, but there are some.. And yet again creative to choose which route you want and play-mode.

Babes(5/5): Still "Babe", even though Rachel's stepsister recently are introduced. But still, Rachel is an icon for cute and innocents.

Overall(4/5): A game which does indeed deserve more than two stars. I'll put four and hope Dev keeps this quality.

Writing this while i just finished V.12

This game has potential to be good but there isnt much to do
You always doing the same things wich can get boring after a while
Maybe in a later update the game can get better i just wait and see
but looking forward to more updates and more outfits

[v 0.11]
This game deserves more than 2,5 stars (as it currently has).
I guess most of the bad reviews come because of the MC, well that is a matter of personal tastes but as such shouldn't influence the final vote, in my opinion.

I, for one, like the "beaty and the beast" setting very much, because it is something really original (I'd say almost unique in this type of games) and the premises on what has to come are great.

There is also the possibility to choose what kind of relationship you want between the two protagonists, which is an obvious plus.
Also obviously, as of now, the best path is the domination path, but I hope the romantic path will get the love it deserves because I'm a sucker for love paths in h-games.

What else to say? The CGs's quality is super, game mechanics look simple but I think they're perfect for this type of game. There is a little grind involved but it is understandable since this game is still on early stages of development but still I didn't find it too time-consuming.

CGs: 9/10
Story: 10/10 (there is just a very brief incipit at the begin of the game but as I said the whole setting is what it makes this good)
Scenes: TBD (still too early to judge, but the dev's plans are very promising)

If you don't mind watching an ugly man seducing a pretty and naive girl then this game is absolutely a must play.

Firstly if you only want to play as a hot 18 year old guy, this game is Not for you. If you get off on the idea that a Babe can learn to Love/Lust after an Ogre then this is perfect for you. And she is a Babe. One of the best. There are still some bugs and minor annoyances but these are gradually getting fixed. I personally rate this as one of my favourites. All the makings of a daddy + daughter without them being related to freak out the incest police. Looking forward to the next update.

Update : what started out with so much promise has totally lost me. To each their own but I am not into needless torture of sweet young girls. and after waiting patiently for the developer to extend the intro into in love route it now seems clear he is just not into that sort of path - so better I leave now.

Too brutal and unnecessarily dark for my liking. Beautiful graphics, beautiful girl (s) just not pleasant to play any more

Boring, nothing happens, you just work most of the time. I don't where this is going, I want the corrupt route but can only interact with her once a day (and it's being mean with her, nothing sexual).

Quite lame game

If you want to play as and old, fat, sick and ugly man in a wheelchair, this is your game. Problem is, I don't know why someone would like to play as such a disgusting character.

At least the 3D model of the feminine character is good.

this is kind of a demo. I think the dev should rethink the whole concept of the game and make the MC way less depressing an a bit more amusing and atractive to play with. The concept of "The Beast and the Beauty" is OK only if the beast isn't too hideous to play with and has some atractive characteristics for the player, as witty and amusing dialogues, acute sense of humor, etc.

Not worth a download in its present state. Its maybe 3 minutes of play time, and by play I mean click "next".

The MC is hideous. It kinda looks like an old woman that is cross dressing as a man?

The story idea is fresh, but very few will play if they have to keep looking at the MC.

Its not even really a "teaser" , not long enough.

I know this is the "business model" for most devs, but it should still be said that its a bad idea to release so early. Put a little meat on it, and get the MC a facelift. Hell, put them in a leather hood if you have to.

It's fairly good, maybe too short, even for a teaser, but the model for the girl is well made. Maybe in the future, if the developer will fix the face of the monstrosity in wheelchair, I'll play it. But the thought of Chucky from Child's Play fucking someone makes me sick to the stomach

My Rating of this Teaser is:

Pros:
-Good Start
-Love the Dialog
-Different Typ of Story
-Old-Man done very Good
-Great Graphics

Cons:
-Just a teaser
Total Ratings is:
This Game is starting off pretty good,
will be Interesting to see where this goes,really a Game that is out of the Ordinary.


Worth the Download
Cant wait for the Next version.