ill give this a try, but something instantly stands out to me..
1st. html only file.. i really really rather download all the files and have control over what im playing around with. When having you download images for me as i play the game, from god who knows site, with image files with potential virus, trojans etc etc.. maybe you dont have them.. but i dont know you.. i dont trust you that much yet.. i preffer to get it all in 1 pack and play offline.
2. img sizes..just when you introduce the family, the 3 portraits of the girls are all 3 different sizes. theyre too big. Especially Jenny. Having a a fixed img size for everything would help a lot.
3. as long as the characters you interact with is not inconsequential, like "random girl in the park 1, 2 & 3" or "random girl from the nightclub" try to keep the same actress for each person. did any of the interactions with the mom/sisters have the same actress in 2 of the scenes?.. i just skimmed through, it looks like every interaction was a new actress.
4. lastly i assume this is something you will be working on later, but a story would be nice.. if i wanted just images and gifs to scroll through, i wouldnt need to be here... im interested in how you creators cut and glue these images together to make a story that can suck me into a make believe world.