The beginning needs choices that define Emma's starting personality and relationship to her peers. The way she deals with her depressed dad(rudely, gently, uncaring)
Alright sorry for replying late
With the choices that you've recommended I think that will make the game more complex and more confusing, the problem I have with GGGB is exactly that, it had too many choices that often confused me and missed some of the routes for example with the dad getting Ashley pregnant you had to make certain decisions and have certain status for the choice to appear.
I'm not saying that your ideas are wrong, I'm saying that I don't think that it will match the gameplay of the game
You said to make choices for Emma to deal with her father but I think if I did that in the prologue it would only fill the game with empty choices and what I mean by that
In the V0.2 version you have 2 sets of choices with the Dad.
The first set is to either yell at him for entering your room or not which will raise Emma's slut points *(I haven't decided if I should add slut points or not yet but I'm putting it out there just in case)*
The second set of choice is to either forgive him or not and this will result in helping him in the future or not
If she forgive him she will help him and go through with this together but if she does not forgive him he will have to try to become a better man by himself to show her that he can change as a person and gain her trust again
this creates 2 paths, if you want to follow Dad's storyline or not
AND you have gained slut points from this scene. Now if I did that on the prologue I think that I would have put empty choices out there
how she interacts with her coworkers(flirting, disgusted, indifferent)
I don't think that this will work because if she flirts with Mikey she will be a slut from the beggining therefore no need to be corrupted if she is disgusted or indifferent by him it will be almost the same storyline with her boss
The way she acts with her boyfriend and how she reacts to her boyfriend going away should also be choices. How is their relationship? Do they have a healthy sex life? Is she angry because he's leaving? Is she just sad? Worried?
I think that the prologue showed just that Emma and her boyfriend have a healthy relationship it was show with the sex scene she also got angry with him leaving for the buisnes trip and later at the airport she make up to him