VN Ren'Py The Promise We Made [v0.5 Part 2] [AdultSpice]

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There's a bit of continuity error in the new update: after the talk with Dad early in the day, Emma automatically leaves for work at the burger place, even though earlier in the game she has potentially already quit/got fired for slapping Frank over him sexually harassing her, marked in flag update_2_emma_left_frank_work1 Yet she's asking as if she has no memory of that whatsoever.
 
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ffive said:
There's a bit of continuity error in the new update: after the talk with Dad early in the day, Emma automatically leaves for work at the burger place, even though earlier in the game she has potentially already quit/got fired over Frank sexually harassing her, marked bin flag update_2_emma_left_frank_work1 Yet she's asking as if she has no memory of that whatsoever.
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Yes I know I forgot to mention this before I was planning to fix this on the beta version or in the next I noticed this when I was wrapping things up and I didn't had time to change the dialogue so I left it for the next time, thank you for reporting it :)
 
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I think there are two endings to this update according to Emma's choice at work, either she goes to Frank's house and there they have sex without a condom and he cums inside her, or the other option is she stays with her father and there is just a kiss. There are no more sex options, right?
 
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AdultSpice, I love this game/story. I only wish that you had corruption and sex act stats running. Like in a diary or phone.
 
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AdultSpice said:
Yes I know I forgot to mention this before I was planning to fix this on the beta version or in the next I noticed this when I was wrapping things up and I didn't had time to change the dialogue so I left it for the next time, thank you for reporting it :)
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There's another possible continuity error as well:
  1. Agree to the Date (update_v5_part2_dad_date = True).
  2. When sitting with Dad, choose "Don't say anything" instead of "Pretend to be his girlfriend". Unless I read the scene wrong, she does not offer to be his pretend girlfriend. Instead she tells him how proud she is that he's fixing his life.
  3. She then goes to work. Choose to leave early.
  4. When she gets home, she is introduced as his girlfriend. Then the scene plays as if she agreed to be the pretend girlfriend, except she did not offer to do so. There should be a shortened/altered scene in which she does not pretend to be his girlfriend.
Also, for the new Frank scene, was it intended to not include previous work decisions? I was surprised that there was no check to see how the work call-in scene went. If she goes when called in, lets it slide, goes back into the kitchen, and then agrees to give him a week, then she "successfully" finished her work shift. Since she didn't 'set boundaries', 'slap him', or 'quit on the spot', it would have been nice to see that referenced back to in the new scene. If she went along with everything, to me their scene could be a little more overt/interested on both sides, and less need for water/Xanax.
 
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The script is good, it's a shame there's no animation in the sex scenes and moaning sounds. In my opinion, this is essential in adult games. :unsure::coffee:
 
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CutieLvr said:
This is a little confusing, it says Part 2, so is there a Part 1?
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The previous update was "part 1" of v.0.5 and iirc this part completes what was originally planned as single update but was too big/taking too long.
 
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Yeah... think I'm done with this one. This update ruined it for me.

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All that above just ruined this game for me. It was alright at first, but this latest update is just no. Best of luck with your game here, but it's just definitely not for me anymore.
 
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cooldevo said:
There's another possible continuity error as well:
  1. Agree to the Date (update_v5_part2_dad_date = True).
  2. When sitting with Dad, choose "Don't say anything" instead of "Pretend to be his girlfriend". Unless I read the scene wrong, she does not offer to be his pretend girlfriend. Instead she tells him how proud she is that he's fixing his life.
  3. She then goes to work. Choose to leave early.
  4. When she gets home, she is introduced as his girlfriend. Then the scene plays as if she agreed to be the pretend girlfriend, except she did not offer to do so. There should be a shortened/altered scene in which she does not pretend to be his girlfriend.
Also, for the new Frank scene, was it intended to not include previous work decisions? I was surprised that there was no check to see how the work call-in scene went. If she goes when called in, lets it slide, goes back into the kitchen, and then agrees to give him a week, then she "successfully" finished her work shift. Since she didn't 'set boundaries', 'slap him', or 'quit on the spot', it would have been nice to see that referenced back to in the new scene. If she went along with everything, to me their scene could be a little more overt/interested on both sides, and less need for water/Xanax.
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You're right I was in a bit of rush and I didn't had time to fix most of these choices in the beta or in the next version those things would be fixed if you have something more please tell me so I can fix them I only knew that if Emma make an excuse to not go to work it was supposed to end there but I didn't fixed yet but you mentioned more errors that slipped through so thank you also you're right on the last part of your response it's a good idea to mention more of how scumbag frank is and metioning the other encounter that Emma had with him I will also add more dialogue to it
 
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SpyderArachnid said:
Yeah... think I'm done with this one. This update ruined it for me.

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All that above just ruined this game for me. It was alright at first, but this latest update is just no. Best of luck with your game here, but it's just definitely not for me anymore.
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As I mention this before I didn't had time to make other changes this doesn't mean that it will stay like this, Emma will be able to go back home and not pretend to be her dad's gf, it wasen't supposed to go back and pretend to be his GF when you didn't promised him so these will be fixed in the next update.

Also in frank route if you flip him off she will leave I put the choice there so that the player can have a choice to leave after that I thought why put more leaving options when you already have one so I didn't add more "leave" options.
Also all the characters are based on kinks paths some of them are dark and some are more romantic
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Even though you didn't like it you responded kindly and I appriciated your response. If I didn't do what you expected I was not planning to trick you I just missunderstood. Thank you for your reply :)
 
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