VN Ren'Py The Prosecutor [v0.1] [DrBunny]

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[TKdropemoff]

thanks for all these comments in the thread.

saved me time..

this sounds like some crap LMAO!!

 

[Skeltom]

The game is truly beautiful, with all its character details and story, giving it an 8 out of 10. However, this deduction isn't due to any bugs or anything like that, but rather to the fact that it's a prologue and short. I'm a game translator, and I can see how many words and characters there are in the game. The game is approximately 17-18K words long, and while it's ideal for a prologue, it feels like they abandoned the game halfway through. It's also fun that the creator broke the fourth wall. In my opinion, the game isn't simple; you'll understand how much effort and time went into it. So, from a translator's perspective, I'd like you to give it a try, because it deserves it. Respectfully.

I'd have to respectfully disagree with about everything you said. The amount of words doesn't matter if it's all drivel. It is simple on account of it not being a VN at all, why bother with player agency and branching when the dev can strong arm everything that happens instead? Fourth wall breaks are never good or funny in my opinion. I don't need the dev to keep reminding me that I'm playing their game.

The exception being the renders, they look fine.

 

[Skeltom]

Reading through some of the comments cracks me,Like anything else in life dont like it move on and stop bitching
I dont go to a trans/futa game and share my feelings about how much i hate that conent,etc
may ask if its avoidable BUT thats it and same with the puzzles and mini games (fucking hate them)i ask if avoidable,
What ever is NOT avoidable i move the fuck on just like you all should too when ya dont like something.
Theres enough abandoned games on this site already how about people STOP bitching and pissing the devs off?

Yeah you are always so civil and never bitch...

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[DrakoGhoul]

Looks decent. So I'll check it out for myself.

 

[Porthas]

godscoper

Read your review, thanks for the heads-up. Sounds like the MC should be Kevin and there should be no little brother.

Also after reading this thread, looks like this review is backed up by other's experience. Thanks everyone, I have dodged a bullet.

 

[Skeltom]

We all have our days,Nice to see someone interested in what i have to say thank you my friend

Just like the people here. Funny that, huh?

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

 

[zeerin3125]

Ey yo, the fuck's wrong with her face lmao. Looks like she's got Atcha-Foya Disease. Additionally, while I've admittedly never taken the bar exam, in what fucking universe is a B a *bad* grade. Is this some non-American grading system that I don't understand because I'm used to the F-A system?
*Edit: Just a little further and I'm convinced this isn't just some non-American grading system, but just some dystopian hellscape inhabited by morons. Note: I'm not calling the dev a moron. I'm calling the "people" inside their game morons.

 

[TheWalkingChinko]

Asian LIs? ✅
Harem? ✅
Pretty bad boy MC? ✅

 

[SupremYoda]

godscoper

Read your review, thanks for the heads-up. Sounds like the MC should be Kevin and there should be no little brother.

Also after reading this thread, looks like this review is backed up by other's experience. Thanks everyone, I have dodged a bullet.

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What??? Kevin is garbage ...

 

[robertweed]

mc is a moe lester, especially to women who are so kind of him, no no no. Wish there was no sister in law angle.
Nevermind kevin is a jerk, i thought he is harsh on mc but love him, but he is selfish, and let his father in law go behind bars

 

[Porthas]

What??? Kevin is garbage ...

Sounds like he has a job and is a productive member of society while MC is a moocher taking advantage of his brother.

I have zero respect for moocher MC's. I think the semi-scientific term for them is "sneaky fuckers."

 

[SupremYoda]

Sounds like he has a job and is a productive member of society while MC is a moocher taking advantage of his brother.

I have zero respect for moocher MC's. I think the semi-scientific term for them is "sneaky fuckers."

The productive member of society cheats on his wife. He's just like the MC, garbage.

 

[Porthas]

The productive member of society cheats on his wife. He's just like the MC, garbage.

I don't care, the MC is mooching and a cheating piece of garbage. Pick your poison, I prefer the dude who is giving his brother an opportunity and is being productive and doing something with his life.

 

[Reniere]

Funny how some Mention the phone call but don't mention who might be behind the call and how
this might be a semi cuck story also.

MC fucks the girl who was obsessed with his brother
Brother Cheating on wife with a women who might be the girl MC fucked.

MC might be getting cucked. and nobody has mentioned this lol

 

[JackMiejov]

The productive member of society cheats on his wife. He's just like the MC, garbage.

That's kind of ironic for a harem game where the MC will be fucking said wife and other women.

 

[Coldblood007]

This dev is weird. I mean he/she really expect players to immerse themselves in a game as a douchbag, rapist and a spineless cuck to boot? Even if I were an asshole in real life, I think I would like to aspire to someone better in my imagination and fantasy. It's like been given a chance to rebuild your life and you chose to be a bottom barrel. Thanks but no thanks.

 

[Bill Temple]

So it's a pornified K-drama? I couldn't imagine a way to make k-dramas worse, but clearly the dev is more creative than me.

 

[Goldz_x]

Another one of those iffy cucky harems, with rape and sloppy seconds...