Played through what's in the game today and enjoyed it! The setting and characters are fun, and I liked the protagonist. The writing is also solid, and I didn't notice much at all in the way of spelling errors or bad grammar. I hope development continues to flesh out the content available!
My main complaints are about presentation:
- I would really like better line spacing between paragraphs if possible, to improve readability.
- Some kind of menu and save/load would also be appreciated in the future if only for scene replays, though not needed for current content.
Since it's a recent release the content is a little sparse to form a basis for 5 stars honestly, but what the hell.
My main complaints are about presentation:
- I would really like better line spacing between paragraphs if possible, to improve readability.
- Some kind of menu and save/load would also be appreciated in the future if only for scene replays, though not needed for current content.
Since it's a recent release the content is a little sparse to form a basis for 5 stars honestly, but what the hell.
