interesting game. I really like the "Val" character but one thing that concerns me is the two-prong direction; meaning you are spending limited development resources on two pathways each update, one for Val and one for Zoey.
I might be in the minority, but as much as it would be awesome to see updates featuring both, i think any kind of ending resolution to your game might take years, unless you have something in mind to wrap up the story.
Only thing I'd request is more of Val in that hover-over outfit from the menu page. She also looks great in that dinner? dress in your latest preview. Total "date-night" vibes from me - or sexy real estate agent of course.