- Jul 21, 2021
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Mate love your game really and suscribed to your patreon. The tone is super genuine and both light and really kinky. I would be very glad to give you some positive feedback on discord (don’t know where in the server though!) but overall: don’t listen to the non constructive critics and keep it genuine and original!As Gregers said, Kari (the redhead) was always intended to be the main LI - it says as much in the blurb for the game. Lois was originally intended to be the slutty secretary and very much a side character, but she's fun and easy to write, and by virtue of her job, MC spends a lot of time with her.
This is my first game and that very much shows, especially in the early stages. I didn't know what a "sandbox" was when I started this, or "NTR" or a million other things. I try stuff out, some things work better than others.
Some characters and events provoke strong responses - people are VERY vocal about things they don't like, but getting useful positive feedback is hard so there are things that get sidelined because it's rare for someone to say "I really liked such and such..."
There are exceptions. There's a gag early on where Mallory tells MC she's in "dire straights" and MC tells her there's no "money for nothing"...
A couple in the Ukraine said that was the funniest thing in the last year and sent me a $100 gift card for renderosity!
Finally, it is just me, ONE person, that has to do everything, so there are lots of things I'd like to cover, but only so many hours in the day, so until I can clone myself there's only so much I can do!
the game is lovely already! Keep going mate, you are doing it great so far!