Just reached end of content for 0.12.02...
Overall: an interesting game that could use sounds, music, and a bit more variety on the dialogue during sex.
The good:
- Variety of women is nice.
- Frequency of sex: plentiful with skip options for many (but not all) of them.
- The setup of the health condition adds some suspense, combined with the potential solution being what it is... (no spoiler)
- About 1/3 the Animations are fluid.
What could be improved:
- Way too many women with "pixie" hairstyles or no hair below their ears. I'm partial to longer hair, but I also understand avoiding hair clipping is a nuisance.
- Sex is repetitive and could use more nuance: specifically, different dialogue than "NOW!" and "YES! YES! YES!" - every single woman says that and MC finishes on her command. Spice it up, change the phrasing, give different women different terms, phrases, sayings, and tastes.
- The "basement girls" are an underused and virtually worthless addon at this point. They've literally been there for weeks? months? years? Just waiting... doesn't make any sense. Needs backstory.
- 1/2 of the Animations are 1 fps slideshows, the rest are per-click still renders.
- Most of the women are doormats. Using the "male pheromone" thing to explain how they all want to pounce on MC at first sight is old, overused, kinda boring and predictable. Giving the women more license, more individuality can be tricky. Some have it, most do not.
- Find some sound effects, instrumental music, (avoid incompetech/Kevin Macelod), and strategically place these where they fit, to improve the overall mood of the scenes.
- The survey around Day 80 should be moved to much, much earlier in the game. Allowing players to set sexual preferences earlier would be better than the handful of sex events that force us to see/play in ways some of us do not wish to participate. (sharing, anal, bukakke, etc)
- Personal preference, completely optional: Perhaps allow players to discourage contraception in the handful of times girls mention it...
- Personal preference, completely optional: Lois being on the treatment... Perhaps let players choose for her to NOT continue it. While big boobs (Mallory / Kiri?) are fine, having a variety - including where Lois is at Day 83 (b-cup) would be awesome. Could be part of Lois coming to terms with her past and accepting herself as-is / confidence.
- Typos: there seem to be very few. I remember seeing "as as" that should be "was as" somewhere...