Interesting story in an unusal setup.
Enjoying it so far and felt it was worthy of getting 5 stars if it was not for sometime frankly ridiculous dialogues that made it lose 1 star for me
Like that case early during the story in which the MC basically stupidly tell "i want to fuck your boobs" to Leyala like if he was a 15 years old teen with limited horny vocabulary.
... but MC is a several thousand years old creature .
That alone nearly took me out of the story from the cringe, a real shame because said story is interesting.
Enjoying it so far and felt it was worthy of getting 5 stars if it was not for sometime frankly ridiculous dialogues that made it lose 1 star for me
Like that case early during the story in which the MC basically stupidly tell "i want to fuck your boobs" to Leyala like if he was a 15 years old teen with limited horny vocabulary.
... but MC is a several thousand years old creature .
That alone nearly took me out of the story from the cringe, a real shame because said story is interesting.