VN Ren'Py The Shrink R&R [Season 2 v2.5] [OneManVN]

[Altru]

Nah, it was a simple misunderstanding. Red and I resolved it quickly. His concern was a creator who was forced to work on something he did not like. That leads to shit games. So, let's move on

You guys are replying faster than ME

That's good, so long as peeps don't leave because I revealed your true likes XD

 

[Altru]

Do you not read? I literally addressed it in the second sentence and we even went on to resolve my misunderstanding.

It happens, sometimes you miss a page... The world still turns and I can STILL read

Just as long as you didn't leave because I got OneManVN to express is true likes

 

[OneManVN]

Well, it's official. It looks like I have reached my first goal. If it stays that way until I get paid in October. The Shrink is getting it's 0.2

 

[Lews Therin Kinslayer]

So I was a little put off by the 0.1 FIXED but seeing the good reviews and how active the dev has been in responding to peeps I now have to try it

 

[Lews Therin Kinslayer]

HOLD THE FUCKING HORSES OR WHATEVER! You're the dev who did Alison fall of the apple? FFS!
Dear sweet Mary mother of FUCKING CHRIST you need to finish that game first, I fucking loved that story. The porn was good too

 

[OneManVN]

HOLD THE FUCKING HORSES OR WHATEVER! You're the dev who did Alison fall of the apple? FFS!
Dear sweet Mary mother of FUCKING CHRIST you need to finish that game first, I fucking loved that story. The porn was good too

I'm not giving up on my baby. Currently working on 0.4.4 Harem V releases sometime in October. Second PC otw for the shrink. Glad you enjoy my games

 

[Axelfire]

on the whole Futa thing, I will just say this, it annoys me that Futa has now come to used almost exclusively for transexuals, rather then hermaphrodites , i have nothing against the first, but the latter is quite my preference, will there be any hermaphrodite content in the game in the future?

 

[OneManVN]

Yes.

 

[sakuyas_mmaster]

Looks interesting. Although I wonder why this game is called "The Shrink".

 

[Lews Therin Kinslayer]

I'm not giving up on my baby. Currently working on 0.4.4 Harem V releases sometime in October. Second PC otw for the shrink. Glad you enjoy my games

Its hard not to enjoy your games. I have no doubt I will enjoy The Shrink when I get around to playing it. I also love that you're so active in this community of low life, twisted, perverted, sick and degenerate web pirates. Keep up the good work man. If I wasn't so goddamn poor I would be a patron

 

[OneManVN]

Its hard not to enjoy your games. I have no doubt I will enjoy The Shrink when I get around to playing it. I also love that you're so active in this community of low life, twisted, perverted, sick and degenerate web pirates. Keep up the good work man. If I wasn't so goddamn poor I would be a patron

Thank you for your compliments. And although I'll admit money would help me, there are times when the little things make an even bigger difference. Like appreciation, it can go a long way. It's hard to stay creative when you hate the people you create for. I am very lucky to have found the best in this community of "low life, twisted, perverted, sick and degenerate web pirates." And believe it or not, 99.5% of my patrons are pirates from this here ship matey. I love this community, Alison, was built with F95 in mind. Take care, and see you at 0.4.4

 

[botc76]

I'd say this one is off to a pretty good start.
The landlady/roommates set-up is of course nothing new, but there's already enough hint of a story going beyond that and the ladies do look nice.

Also, a hot redhead called Leliana? Well, for me as a big DAO-fan who ends up with a certain someone almost every playthrough (and boy do I have a lot of those ) that can only be seen as a plus.
So far there are quite a few redheads here, compared to the other hair-colours, but who would complain about that?

Definitely will be keeping tabs on this one.

 

[Toaster22]

The music is nice and many of the pictures are nice, but the characterization and storytelling doesn't flow for me.

My problem is that once these last two elements go wrong, I start clicking through the dialogue as fast as possible and lose interest. The scientist (mom?) is angry because shes married to a black guy who is shagging a tranny maid? I may be off here.

It might be a good game, but somehow the characterization has to be built up better initially, and I have to find a reason to care.

 

[McWoodz]

I can't make head or tails of this. The music is nice and many of the pictures are nice, but the characterization and storytelling doesn't flow or make sense.

My problem is that once these key elements go wrong, I start clicking through the dialogue as fast as possible and lose interest.

I can't trust the developer not to waste my time. So maybe it's a great game, but I'll never know.

If you're offering no actual examples and skipping through dialogue as fast as possible you're wasting the dev's time, your time and the time of anyone else who reads this by even commenting here.

You're the first person that seems to have had this problem so maybe it could be solved by actually reading the words and paying attention to what's going on.

Just a thought.

 

[Azraelith]

I start clicking through the dialogue as fast as possible and lose interest.

That's a you problem. Essentially as this is a bare-bones prologue I'm assuming OMVN has a plan in mind for it later as he is also working on Alison (which is actually a pretty good game). From what I can tell the Shrink is more or less about an infestation/jealousy case gone horribly (apocalyptic levels) wrong, I'm going to assume that the 'infected' are basically similar to rage zombies except (possibly) horny sex machines until they fall apart literally.

 

[McWoodz]

I'm going to assume that the 'infected' are basically similar to rage zombies except (possibly) horny sex machines until they fall apart literally.

Now that's a good theory. Definitely like that one.

 

[HorizonD]

And where would be the shrinking part in that theory?

Look at the Homo's "sword"... maybe it was some kind of a sword in the past but now it's a joke.
I think it has something to do with certain parts of the male anatomy.

Scientist wife was angry about her husband cheating on her and made a virus to shrink his thingy.
Husbands thingy shrunk and is no more impressive to females, so no more cheating.
But by accident, the virus spreads around and most of the male population is affected by the shrinking.
That's my theory.^^

 

[alpharenji]

I already like this one alot I cant wait for more

 

[smut]

on the whole Futa thing, I will just say this, it annoys me that Futa has now come to used almost exclusively for transexuals, rather then hermaphrodites , i have nothing against the first, but the latter is quite my preference, will there be any hermaphrodite content in the game in the future?

I guess people are just different, I very much prefer the look without a vagina because "both" weirds me out. However, the terms are becoming intertwined and meaningless I agree on that.

 

[Axelfire]

tbf the site should just have an explicit hermaphrodite tag, this does nothing on the whole the terms becoming meaningless, but at least will help with the confussion