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I know, but wouldn't it make more sense to introduce his wife to the boss by her full name?
Yeah, and dozens of other games tooYou should stay away from Summer Gone
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rukoblud
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The plot set is interesting. Tired of seeing too much strange sci-fi games. The best things could be are interesting plot, catchy psychology, hot mcs.
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OK, just finished the update. Thank you for sharing!
Just a few suggestions: Have the characters' names in their own individual colour – It’ll make it easier to distinguish during conversations.
Do yourself a favour and please, please! fix the spelling mistakes. They really take away from the enjoyment of the story. Also maybe consider having Mila’s internal monologue in italics?
Overall you’ve done a very good job of setting up realistic family dynamics as well as depicting the too-real plight of poor migrants the world over (starting from scratch and at risk of getting taken advantage of).
Love the various characters – art and personalities – so far (I like how the clothes say so much about each character), and it is a delight to read descriptions of places and people, depicting a lot with few words. I hope in the future we can see more scenes depicted - street, scenes, etc (yeah it's time consuming but it would add so much to the game.)
I enjoy the slow build-up of the story, giving us time to get to know the MC and her surrounds. I look forward to seeing Mila develop and grow as a person and where it all leads.
Keep up the good work!
PS Do you draw the art yourself? If not can you link to the artist's work, please. Would love to see more of it.
Just a few suggestions: Have the characters' names in their own individual colour – It’ll make it easier to distinguish during conversations.
Do yourself a favour and please, please! fix the spelling mistakes. They really take away from the enjoyment of the story. Also maybe consider having Mila’s internal monologue in italics?
Overall you’ve done a very good job of setting up realistic family dynamics as well as depicting the too-real plight of poor migrants the world over (starting from scratch and at risk of getting taken advantage of).
Love the various characters – art and personalities – so far (I like how the clothes say so much about each character), and it is a delight to read descriptions of places and people, depicting a lot with few words. I hope in the future we can see more scenes depicted - street, scenes, etc (yeah it's time consuming but it would add so much to the game.)
I enjoy the slow build-up of the story, giving us time to get to know the MC and her surrounds. I look forward to seeing Mila develop and grow as a person and where it all leads.
Keep up the good work!
PS Do you draw the art yourself? If not can you link to the artist's work, please. Would love to see more of it.
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I liked it, the characters are well drawn, I like this type of art, I expect spicy and very sensual scenes with this beautiful girl, will there be incest or relationship with old people? I like it in games, but even though I don't have it in the game, it's a game I'm definitely going to play
good luck!!
good luck!!
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The art style is nice, but I'll wait till there's erotic scenes.
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It's also clearly New York City, does everyone forget that Harlem was a predominately black community starting in the 1920s?
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mate it's just a 0.1 version. . . all 0.1 - 0.3 versions are short updates, cuz it's purpose is to show the concept of the game, and then get to expand it after. All of games here are early access. Plus the fact it's game based on artworks - VN -Ren'Py. Ya know how long it takes to create art the way ya want it to look, by yourself?
it's not AAA game with huge budget, where hundreds of people are working on the game.
strong start! the story so far is gripping. i like the designs of the characters, the really tell you who they are from just looking at them. the script is well written and make me actually pay attention instead of just skimming through it like how i usually play games here. hopefully this will be updated further bc this is one of the good ones.
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3 days to wait...
It seems still no release today?
edit - another delay (not a good start...)
Dev disappeared here too. Too much trouble, I guess.
It seems still no release today?
edit - another delay (not a good start...)
Dev disappeared here too. Too much trouble, I guess.
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Hello friends
Is the MC this game easy girl or hard girl ( or lady ) ? I mean, do she have necessary resistance ( strong personality ) or do she quickly accept an emotional or sexual relationship ? I hope she have sufficient and necessary resistance
Is the MC this game easy girl or hard girl ( or lady ) ? I mean, do she have necessary resistance ( strong personality ) or do she quickly accept an emotional or sexual relationship ? I hope she have sufficient and necessary resistance
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Hey guys! I hope you are doing well. I have made progress with the update and it should release this week. It's been a huge pain in the ass with many unfortunate things making it hard to work on the game due to RL stuff, from being sick on and off to other even more annoying problems. Very grateful for your support and patience and I hope moving forward I am able to keep up a more consistent release schedule, 2-3 weeks.
For the next one, as mentioned previously I will focus on updating art and some technical stuff as to how art is displayed to hopefully save me headached in the future. Some people asked about this in the DMs, so yeah Mila will meet a group of younger folks like her whom you can hang out with, but that's for the next update.
Also, I really like how this scene turned out. Don't they look cute together
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The artwork is nice, but their faces look almost identical. I thought they were siblings.You must be registered to see the links
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For the next one, as mentioned previously I will focus on updating art and some technical stuff as to how art is displayed to hopefully save me headached in the future. Some people asked about this in the DMs, so yeah Mila will meet a group of younger folks like her whom you can hang out with, but that's for the next update.
Also, I really like how this scene turned out. Don't they look cute together
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