VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Smuggler - A Star Wars Porn Parody [v0.1] [SparrowBruh]

[morpheusahrms]

...I just happen to not be interested in Star Wars at all since Disney bought it...

Yeah it is a sad, sad state of affairs. To think that one would get nostalgic for the even handed, subtle and mature style of George Lucas...

And yeah, not dissing the Dev either (I don't even want to know how atrocious my own attempts at digital art would be...), but a text based game with a few images might have been a better design decision.

 

[Taryn2176]

Is that John Wick I see???

I'll admit, the first thing I thought when I saw the guy was "Is that Keanu Reeves?"

Honestly, though, I imagine something by me would not even look this good, so props to the dev for doing this well and being confident enough to get it out there for people to see. I've not tried it yet, so can't critique the game play.

 

[bangalang]

Don't let them get to you sparrow! It looks fine, and is way better than anything I could make. Keep up the good work

 

[Avaron1974]

People complain about text-based,

Considering text based games are some of the biggest money makers in adult gaming, not that many people complain.

 

[WantonWhimsy]

i appreciate his work and that he´s sharing, but it must be said in truth: if you can´t draw and you have no Artist at Hand or don´t want to use 3d modeling or pics out of the Internet it would be better to just make a html game first with only text.

And yeah, not dissing the Dev either (I don't even want to know how atrocious my own attempts at digital art would be...), but a text based game with a few images might have been a better design decision.

While there are similarities, writing an HTML game in Twine not the same as writing game events in Ren'Py. Neither of those is like building dialog trees or random encounters in RPGM. And after a significant amount of work has been done using one game engine, the amount of effort it would take to move to a different one is usually not worth the effort.

I've honestly seen a lot worse in flash games in the past decade.

Truth!

I'm not a fan of the art style either, but I'll give props for trying original artwork. Better that stealing a bunch of random unrelated pics off Google, or using the same four 3D models you see in every. Fucking. Game. ​

 

[Frurose]

I don't know who deleted my post, I think it should have remained up. At least people stopped attacking the game designer.

As for my opinion, the art is fine and the writing is good. I'll just wait to see how the content develops. The Star Wars universe is a great place to make a game because it is huge and well developed. There are even several different timelines to choose from. I'm hoping this VN (according to the tag) is able to have enough flexibility and play ability to be considered a game.

 

[Warsteel]

LMAO all the shade thrown at the guy's artwork in this thread you'd think you were in an animation forum. Truth is, while certainly not top shelf, the art in this game is better than 99 out of 100 people can manage. In fact, were there any posts by anyone offering to help with the art? Hmmm? Crickets? Of course not.

 

[smith66]

The first Bobbins comic by John Allison

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The best way to get better is to keep trying.

 

[Rastafoo]

Dang, did an elementary schooler draw this?

 

[Anon21]

So is this basically a parody of Han Solo and his Nookie.

Yeah, I have nothing to say. I just wanted an excuse for the Wookie Nookie pun.

 

[RedPillBlues]

In fact, were there any posts by anyone offering to help with the art? Hmmm? Crickets? Of course not.

Alright, for this point forwards, I hereby offer my assistance.

 

[Brady2626]

MSPaint?

 

[PutuPisReal]

Can't smack the ugly off of this. Just slap a "Star Wars" tag on anything and morons will flock to it

 

[SparrowBruh]

Hey guys, MSPaint here! Thanks for all the feedback, everyone. I'll have to go back to the drawing board, maybe "learn2draw, m8" a bit more.

Porn games with terrible art aren't really sexy. Learn 3d modeling or maybe get someone that can draw better. Sorry mate.

Tried daz, it was a jumbled mess for me. I found renpy easier to learn

damn, how does one rotate text in MS paint

Seen a tutorial once. Can be done

I don't actually think the art is that bad...
If it was homogenous. But I have the feeling that the fighters in the second screen (scale, man, SCALE! What kind of midgets live in that town?) aren't the same style as that town nearby. Looks like the creator really just wanted to put them in there.

The little alien guy is one of them ankle shooters, like the jawas

I've honestly seen a lot worse in flash games in the past decade.
Granted, for the purpose of most games here, the art might not do, but there's text/story based games that still use graphics for illustrations of locations and to quickly show the appearance of a character, and I think for that purpose, homogeneity is more important than any other qualities.
- I just happen to not be interested in Star Wars at all since Disney bought it, so I will never know if this game can capitalize on those areas eventually.

Agreed, SW's been shit since Disney. Rey not really fapable in my opinion. I'm setting the story here before the new movies, but with "scenes and vistas" from them, and oldschool characters. Salt planet, pretty cool concept, right?

Can't smack the ugly off of this. Just slap a "Star Wars" tag on anything and morons will flock to it

Where's this flock you speak of? You just wanted to use that expression, didn'tcha?


Will come back with hopefully improved backgrounds and sexier characters! Pray for me

 

[nZk]

Hey guys, MSPaint here! Thanks for all the feedback, everyone. I'll have to go back to the drawing board, maybe "learn2draw, m8" a bit more.
Will come back with hopefully improved backgrounds and sexier characters! Pray for me

Good luck with the project sire, may the midichlorians be with you!

 

[hipslipblip]

Art tart fart. Real question is, where is the alien poon?

 

[mememannorman]

what the fuck is that art

 

[Parthornax]

Is that keanu reeves?

 

[Baharomont]

Soo sadaly, Project is aboned

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX