Crower_
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This reminds me a little of the girls in Japan. (I do not generalize)This whole concept of sex in game affects girl magically is funny in theory, but I just cannot see a well-written way to make the IRL segments make sense, outside of:
If 1) is the case, the game would need to explain why they're living together and why she seems to hint towards wanting more in their relationship. The "tsundere" trait doesn't really fit here, because tsunderes are supposed to act spicy, but actually like the people they act that way towards. There's nothing here that suggests she likes the MC at all. And if 2) is the case, it also still doesn't explain why she hates the guy.
- 1) Luna genuinely hating the MC already, which is why she never has sex with him because:
- If she easily goes into heat and she can't control it, there's no logical reason why the MC isn't getting sucked dry. It just doesn't make sense that she's willing to invite other random people over to have sex, rather than her established love interest, even IF she normally wouldn't have sex with him because she's too shy. The only way it would make sense is if the other people were closer to her, but that's not the case as they live together.
- If it's not heat, but game magic bullshit, why still not have sex with the MC? He's right there..
- The game mind-controlling her, making her dislike the MC/like the people in-game who fuck her.
- To which the question is... why? Why would it make her dislike the MC? As of now it reads like she really hates the guy for seemingly no reason.
- Making it so that Luna like people who do stuff to her in-game more IRL would explain why she's willing to fuck them. But that doesn't really provide an answer as to why she seems to hate every bone in MC's body. Also doesn't explain why her horniness never seems to flow towards the MC when it's pretty obvious she's horny.
And the "beastgirl in heat can't control herself" concept is just not it if sticking to the "MC never getting any" is what's gonna happen. Logic would assume she'd devour the closest man (MC) to her, but she doesn't. Which means she can control herself. Which means it doesn't make sense that she's willing to fuck people that isn't the person she is supposed to "like". That is unless her dislike of MC is so strong that it overpowers her sexual instinct, to which I say lol.
Honestly, just make them platonic roommates where the MC has a one-sided crush on her. That would at least make sense.
I honestly couldn't care less about Anon. He's cardboard as cardboard can be. But Luna is supposed to be the main girl and she's just not really logical in any way. Hence why the small change of potential romantic relationship to one-sided crush works. Because it would immediately explain why Luna doesn't seem to "like" the guy outside of the very contradictory ways she sometimes lashes out.
They usually separate sexual satisfaction from love. "I love you with all my heart, but if I have the opportunity I will make you cuckold with bigger cocks."
(Using translator)