Thought no one liked it so, idk if I should continue
Just because there aren't any patrons yet doesn't mean that nobody shows interest. It often has personal reasons, like some not having enough money to keep a "simple" subrsciption, as it is for many people.
You released the first episode without much content, just the introduction with additional scenes, which is why people are probably waiting for another update, to see where this is going.
There are cases were developers quit in early development, and as this looks like one of those cases, it should explain why there are no patrons yet.
I sort of lost hope as well as some others, and it looks like a miracle that you posted here, but again, with the impression that you won't continue.
Only a personal opinion, maybe not the only points, but the most obvious for me, what I don't like.
A preference of mine, personally I don't like if breasts are made too big. I don't have anything against big breasts, but I don't like it if it goes over the edge to huge ones.
Another point is the that you already had sex with the main female character, which somewhat spoils the mood. A player often feels better when progressing, not when he gets to a point which actually happend already, but additionally have no recollection of.
Edit: Two more things.
The green haired (slut) character just has sex with anybody, and some people don't like this sort of thing, because the protagonist should be the one in the middle of it, me partly included.
And the last thing would be the sudden end with the assassination attempt, but without the ending of it.