I would say have a name instead of "The Dude" as the starting portion since it reads weird if you go along with anything like that.
In "The Therapist\Media\Background" there is a file named "shade2r.png" this should be "shader.png"
In library "You couldapproach" (needs a space)
Your location has school and scoolinter might want to add that missing h
Nikki being Neighbours daughter : needs an apostrophe. Neighbour's
You got$args.rawdollars
open doors in school needs spacing. "you could get her naked.orYou can leave before you do something you'll regret." (as you can see no space after period and after or)
Library girls want you to be cool but there is no "cool" stat.
Try to keep to a single file type, whether it is jpeg, png, webp, whatever.
Choices might be nice to have them bolded and surrounded by a background to have it stand out.