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Alleykatt

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May 19, 2017
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This was pretty good. I agree with the above that it was a little dialogue heavy, but nice AI art. There were also no choices - it would be much stronger if you allow us to influence the story.
 
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shotzpro

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Oct 27, 2018
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Hi thank you for the suggestions! Yes the prologue need polishing, and I am on it and developing Chapter 1 as we speak.
Yes the patreons free right now because patreon is giving me trouble with payment systems and verification, so Im thinking i will move to subsribestar instead. Still not sure yet, till then, posts on patreon will be free for everyone and I will develop the game regardless if the game makes money or not.
Stay on Patreon, that's where the NTR-NTS audience is. And I agree with the other guy, I don't mind it being a Kinetic Novel, without choices like MNG, it keeps growing on Patreon and the game continues to be developed without any problems. Your game seems more like a story that is being told, it doesn't need choices.

If you make conversations easier to read, simple dialogues, it's easier for you and easier for us.
 

kristo0086

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Nov 17, 2021
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Hi thank you for the suggestions! Yes the prologue need polishing, and I am on it and developing Chapter 1 as we speak.
Yes the patreons free right now because patreon is giving me trouble with payment systems and verification, so Im thinking i will move to subsribestar instead. Still not sure yet, till then, posts on patreon will be free for everyone and I will develop the game regardless if the game makes money or not.
Will there be different routes in the game or is it a kinetic novel?
 
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4.40 star(s) 5 Votes