i think every point and criticism is important for creator to potentially better his game if he choose to after seeing your ideas, i would just keep it civil and not behave like asshole - oh man ur game is shit and this and that, nono you got some ideas story wise send them to DEV and he can evaluate and maybe use some for his story, "nvm what i said still good" i dont agree with that thats why i asked for what you wanted to see in the story which is nothing bad, people wont like everything equally ever same with food same with music, thats why i asked what would you change in the story, and fans arent beggars devs want as many fans as possible so they can pay their bills and continue working, and sadly many creators making bad names with unfinished products while they wont close their money accounts but anyway, i think as story progresses forward there is less and less turns it can take without changing everything from beginning so having some interesting ideas you could share because u dont like human origin very much would be an interesting read thats why i asked because u didnt like explanation in the story