If all you require for your wank material is a basic scene setup ( like "here's a guy fucking a girl" or "this chick's getting blackmailed into fucking that dude") and some okay-ish renders this will probably work for you.
(even then you could get your "fix" elsewhere with less time wasted)
If not, this is basically the kind of "bottom of the barrel" in terms of writing that makes most stuff I'd otherwise describe as such seem like masterpieces.
Calling the storytelling illogical and characters inconsistent would be a complete understatement. Both are at best incoherent.
As for the basic premise:
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So we are to believe that there is this law enforcement agency that gives a guy major plastic surgery to send him undercover into a criminal organization instead of sending someone who already looks the part.
- Fair enough. Suspension of disbelief is still intact at this point
Next up, because he doesn't give a fuck about either his job or his family he brings his family (a wife and two daughters) into it and has a bunch of violent thugs at their home on a daily basis.
- Wait, what?
Then, because nobody in the agency gives a fuck about the job or the family involved, they let his son return home after a year away... and because that's not enough he doesn't even get proper a preparation for what is in store for him... which in turn leads to him immediately getting a beatdown by his father.
- Now the writer's just taking the piss, right?
And for the cherry on top: The gang's hideout? Yep. It's in the family's fucking basement.
- Aaaaand... logic has officially left the building
As for characters and dialogues:
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To fit with the general storytelling that's already on the level of a rambling lunatic we get to decide to act either kind of like a regular person or like a complete and utter dickhead. Of course, to fit in with this clusterfuck, I decided to act like a complete asshole because... you know... fuck those guys, they're obviously just all aliens on their first day on earth trying to imitate real people without having the slightest clue of how those act.
Anyways... within a day I had the protagonist call his mother and sisters sluts on multiple occasions, grope, prank and slap them... and by the evening mom was giving him a tipsy handjob on the couch... all the while his relationship with them didn't suffer from it. at all. Obviously. Because that's how people work.
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And people in all seriousness are giving this thing full marks. Full marks!
This is why we can't have nice things.
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Addendum:
Visually it is okay-ish. I've seen worse and I have seen better. The quality of the renders is about average for western VN style porn games with 3DCG, which is to say... not great.
Navigation/"Gameplay" is clunky but that's mostly owed to it being made in renpy so that is to be expected.
(even then you could get your "fix" elsewhere with less time wasted)
If not, this is basically the kind of "bottom of the barrel" in terms of writing that makes most stuff I'd otherwise describe as such seem like masterpieces.
Calling the storytelling illogical and characters inconsistent would be a complete understatement. Both are at best incoherent.
As for the basic premise:
==========================
So we are to believe that there is this law enforcement agency that gives a guy major plastic surgery to send him undercover into a criminal organization instead of sending someone who already looks the part.
- Fair enough. Suspension of disbelief is still intact at this point
Next up, because he doesn't give a fuck about either his job or his family he brings his family (a wife and two daughters) into it and has a bunch of violent thugs at their home on a daily basis.
- Wait, what?
Then, because nobody in the agency gives a fuck about the job or the family involved, they let his son return home after a year away... and because that's not enough he doesn't even get proper a preparation for what is in store for him... which in turn leads to him immediately getting a beatdown by his father.
- Now the writer's just taking the piss, right?
And for the cherry on top: The gang's hideout? Yep. It's in the family's fucking basement.
- Aaaaand... logic has officially left the building
As for characters and dialogues:
==========================
To fit with the general storytelling that's already on the level of a rambling lunatic we get to decide to act either kind of like a regular person or like a complete and utter dickhead. Of course, to fit in with this clusterfuck, I decided to act like a complete asshole because... you know... fuck those guys, they're obviously just all aliens on their first day on earth trying to imitate real people without having the slightest clue of how those act.
Anyways... within a day I had the protagonist call his mother and sisters sluts on multiple occasions, grope, prank and slap them... and by the evening mom was giving him a tipsy handjob on the couch... all the while his relationship with them didn't suffer from it. at all. Obviously. Because that's how people work.
==========================
And people in all seriousness are giving this thing full marks. Full marks!
This is why we can't have nice things.
==========================
Addendum:
Visually it is okay-ish. I've seen worse and I have seen better. The quality of the renders is about average for western VN style porn games with 3DCG, which is to say... not great.
Navigation/"Gameplay" is clunky but that's mostly owed to it being made in renpy so that is to be expected.
