VN Ren'Py The Viper [v0.4] [boboqwe]

[StrawberryCheese83]

Sorry to say it so bluntly....but...I gave the Dev credit for one really good mission accomplished. He made the most unlikable FMC in gaming history of VN`s ever. So congrats for developing and giving this nutbag her voice. Never in my gaming history have i ever someone despised more than her. She s dirt...garbage...a 5$ Whore...she deserves the worst...in my eyes...and i really, really hope that at some point someone put her down...for good...and the rest of her mentally disabled Gang (Jack,Adam, Elsa..and so on) should join her. Spare Jeffrey and fgs give him a little backbone. He could easily fight back against these bitches from hell. Maybe you will allow him at gome point to turn the tables?!?! Who knows... Phew..i had to let it out. Thank you.

 

[lyondijon]

oh there is "worse" femdom characters in games around here believe me, them actually killing guys after hard torture. Now with the update and revealing of the fmc backstory, this reveal kinda reduces the hotness of the corruption theme carried by the Elsa character which I found quite hot since the bride / fmc now seems to have acted on her own "badness" and not by having been corrupted...

 

[boboqwe]

Hello, if your female character does not evoke sympathy, it means that I have poorly worked out the beginning of the story, where the player, the situation that happened to Nicole should evoke sympathy. But I want to warn you that nothing terrible has happened yet (Only if Jeffrey decided to break up with Nicole, not having enough brave points).
I plan to include the main hardcore line in the third chapter . In many games, players simply demand retribution in rage, and do not find it. I want to give it to them.

As for the fact that I abandoned the slow path of corruption, which nullified the slow corruption of the female character, this is a lack of time.
A good person can't change so much in two game days to do all these terrible things. It would be necessary to slowly walk around for another game week, and this would take 7-10 months of development. That's why I decided to find another way, which disappointed some players.

 

[<sunrise>]

Very good story, a move with perspective from a female character is very successful, makes the picture complete and holistic, helping to fill in the gaps. I would say overal story is very lifelike, maybe unless beyond manipulation, calculation and infidelity she also has to squeeze money out of him, because "a real man should". In the end, during their further divorce she must take away half of the property from him. Classic. The boy's word)

 

[Xykol1]

Nice game with an interesting plot and good femdom scenes. I like Nicole's character development; we need more femdom content. I hope Nicole will be a good mistress for Jeffrey at the end of the story. Thanks, Dev!

 

[Shima131414]

Great game and story! I really like the way the story is presented from first the male, then the female protagonist's perspective. I also like the psychological aspect of the game and how it plays with your mind, when the main protagonist is decieved and humiliated. I enjoy the kinks so far and hope to see more ways for the protagonist to be humiliated. Its a great start and I hope this game is developed further. Based on the start I wouldn't mind if the development of this game was supported trough a Patreon subscription. Can't wait for the story to continue!

But 3.0 didn't work in my device it shows an exception error ,
An exception has occurred.
ScriptError: could not find label 'Nikki_wensday'. How to fix

 

[SpexIhr]

There appears to be an error:
While running game code:
File "game/chapter 2.rpy", line 3362, in script
jump Nikki_wensday
ScriptError: could not find label 'Nikki_wensday'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/chapter 2.rpy", line 3362, in script
jump Nikki_wensday
File "F:\The Viper 0 4-pc\0.4-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1712, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "F:\The Viper 0 4-pc\0.4-pc\renpy\script.py", line 1103, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'Nikki_wensday'.