boboqwe there's a typo in 2chapter_ two.rpy, on line 7860, and it crashes the game when ditching Josef: "dissolven" instead of "dissolve".
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. Downloading issues? Look here.A high quality game since the Chapter 2.
At first it looked like mid femdom game, not bad but not great either, with some generic filler plot to make suitable scenes. But now things have gotten really interesting since we were allowed to see the events from the Nicole point of view. In my opinion, the author managed to convincingly depict Nicole's descent into (nearly) psychopathic misandry with uncontrollable anger issues. Not only that, but there are also interesting moments when already in such a state she again finds herself on the verge of rape, etc.
There are some ideas that I don't like about the plot, but overall I am very pleased, there are thrilling power dynamics in this game well thought out, and I hope the dev will eventually complete this game.
There are some minor flaws though. For example, some minor plot inconsistencies between Chapter 1 and 2 (Nicole can decide in Chapter 2 what she did in Chapter 1, but back then these decisions were taken for granted), but I guess the dev will make some clean-up later.
The other thing is how character models are not to proper scale. Nicole is apparently intended to be smaller (given her head/torso proportions, comparing her with Jeffrey who is clearly needs to be higher, etc). I guess this is technical issue that the dev can't solve yet.
At first it looked like mid femdom game, not bad but not great either, with some generic filler plot to make suitable scenes. But now things have gotten really interesting since we were allowed to see the events from the Nicole point of view. In my opinion, the author managed to convincingly depict Nicole's descent into (nearly) psychopathic misandry with uncontrollable anger issues. Not only that, but there are also interesting moments when already in such a state she again finds herself on the verge of rape, etc.
There are some ideas that I don't like about the plot, but overall I am very pleased, there are thrilling power dynamics in this game well thought out, and I hope the dev will eventually complete this game.
There are some minor flaws though. For example, some minor plot inconsistencies between Chapter 1 and 2 (Nicole can decide in Chapter 2 what she did in Chapter 1, but back then these decisions were taken for granted), but I guess the dev will make some clean-up later.
The other thing is how character models are not to proper scale. Nicole is apparently intended to be smaller (given her head/torso proportions, comparing her with Jeffrey who is clearly needs to be higher, etc). I guess this is technical issue that the dev can't solve yet.
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Thanks for you feedback.
You wrote " some minor plot inconsistencies between Chapter 1 and 2 (Nicole can decide in Chapter 2 what she did in Chapter 1, but back then these decisions were taken for granted)" , let me know what you mean.
I mean the scene where Jeffrey is going to go home with medicine for Nicole. As we learn in the next chapter, Nicole may reject Jack's proposal that evening, and in the Chapter 1 Jeffrey apparently can't cross paths with Jack in any case in the current version of the game (at least there were no such scene in my playthrough). However, the next day Jeffrey still mentions that he saw Jack coming out of the bathroom, when he talks to Nicole (this latter scene takes place in Chapter 1).
I think there was another similar issue, but I can't remember right now.
Maybe. I could have done that. I'll check the code. And if it's not too much trouble, let me know what parts of the plot you didn't like. Feedback helps me improve.
To say "didn't like" is too strong, rather there were a few "so-so" moments. And even then, this is not about something objectively subject to criticism, i. e. plot holes or something, but rather related to a matter of taste, so it isn't necessary about "improvement", just to look at from different angle, perhaps.
Also keep in mind that I haven't completed available content in the current version yet.
1) You can interpret Jeffrey in many (not mutually exclusive) ways. In my case, it is either he is a complete idiot who can't figure out the true nature of Nicole even at the end of the first chapter (who is behaving as if not afraid of the mafia, even "forgetting" to track down Boris - Nicole relaxed too much to stick to the role in front of Jeffrey perhaps? Let alone the hotel worker scene), or a complete weak-willed wimp, or in absolute denial about his girl due to mental trauma and guilt complex. I prefer the latter option and it works relatively well, you can interpret Jeffrey like that.
Still, I'd prefer that he would be tormented by obvious doubts more clearly, yet suppressing them, to make it clear that he is not simply that naive, but is happy to be deceived. This is especially relevant for the more "brave" path where Jeffrey tries to oppose Jack.
In general, I like the idea of the main character being rather determined, with principles but too gallant with his lady for his own good... here the guilt complex is very suitable indeed. It was also fun to see how Nicole was irritated by untimely "noble" stubbornness of Jeffrey. Good laugh!
2) I'm not sure how Sam will enter the plot, but maybe the game shouldn't be overloaded with too many strong-willed girls. For me the main selling point of your game is how Nicole becomes mentally ill in the harsh M.A.N.S. world (at the same time poisoning Jeffrey's life as a collateral damage). But for that world to "shine", it shouldn't be overshadowed by too many dominating girls. I was sceptical about Elsa at first because of this, but now I think she is very suitable, because she also manipulates Nicole, which is extremely fun thing to see. But I'm not sure if the third character like this would fit in as well.
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another bug, line 8449, Fade() missing arguments, after this scene
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