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Looks very interesting! What do you think about re-building humanity by some heavy breeding and impregnation, pregnant content?
The water effect is kind of exaggerated. They're actually living under a dome and the mc's house is in a tall building. But yeah that would be a cool endingAre you sure you want to open those windows?
bad ending #5 GAME OVER, lol
Thank you for your feedback! I want to make it known Ashley is actually not the girlfriend of MC. They just have casual sex. Since most of the characters will have a storyline like corruption or romance I felt the need to input at least one sex scene with a casual fuckbuddy. I know now how it looks, it's my bad sorry. When i was writing i already knew most of the things in my head so i guess i just assumed everybody would . About sandbox you are mostly right. I am planning on making the game sandbox but I am still learning how to develop a game. And there is a chance it may not be sandbox if the general concensus swings that way.View attachment 2611567
Dev, kinks/fetishes are going to be avoidable (they don't happen in the story according to player choice) skippable (they happen but the player doesn't see the scene) forced by plot?
EDIT: Hmm, as the version says a demo 5-10 minutes of reading maybe, the story looks interesting and the art too.(the idea reminds me a bit of the game S.H.E.L.T.E.R, except that the father here is dead )
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Good luck.
Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate it. About the girlfriend thing, like i mentioned before to Chimba, she is not actually mc's girlfriend. She is a casual fuckbuddy. But as i said i can see how it looks. Sorry for the confusion! Also thank you for your feedback on the names. That's a good idea!For a demo this was pretty good. Love the artwork, and saw you mention that expressions and all that will come later, so can't wait for that (they all seem rather lifeless right now lol). The water reflections in the windows are a cool attention to detail and look great. Writing is good and the premise to the story is neat. Like Chimba mentioned, it does remind me of S.H.E.L.T.E.R a bit as well. Not a bad thing though. At least there is no sandbox here.
I don't mind starting with a girlfriend already (love the challenge of being faithful to her lol), but I hope future relations/sex won't be forced on us. Hope we always get a choice in those matters. And besides, she's not that bad. At least she is willing to stand by her man in his crazy idea, while his family won't lol.
Looks like incest will be down the road. You get to name your relationships, though some extra naming might help. Maybe adding the "who is this to you" and the "what do you call them" option in all circumstances. Right now it just has "what do you call them" only. Felt a little off with the mom only calling you son, instead of your name at times and the sister only calling you brother instead of your name lol.
Either way, in the end, nice job. Can't wait to see the final version of the first release with expressions and the rest added. Feel like this could be a good one. Best of luck with your project and thanks!
Thank you for your interest!Looks very interesting! What do you think about re-building humanity by some heavy breeding and impregnation, pregnant content?
Oh, does this mean we will have the option to choose romance routes with love interests instead of corruption routes?Since most of the characters will have a storyline like corruption or romance I felt the need to input at least one sex scene with a casual fuckbuddy.
Maybe in the next updates i can add a feature where ashley gets a pet name and you can decide what she is.can we make ashley your gf later on?
Not for this version. But next version I am going to be adding animations. I am working on that right now.Are scenes animated?
Thank you for the feedback about sandbox, you actually gave me a better understanding of what it should be like. Also for the art compliment, I'm glad you liked it!Oh, does this mean we will have the option to choose romance routes with love interests instead of corruption routes?
Corruption isn't exactly my jam. Much less with the landlady and the roommate. Wink wink.
If you want to implement sandbox, you have to implement it right. Easy navigation, no infinite clicks, minimum grinding (or even better, no grinding at all lol), hints to know what to do, where to go and who to see, etc. Something fluid and fun.
Most of us who are tired of sandbox games is because the implementation is horrendous, not intuitive at all and you have to do 50 ridiculous quests to get a handjob from a love interest, end up getting interrupted and you didn't cum. So, yeah. Study it conscientiously.
The art looks really great, btw.
Thank you for your kind words about the art! Based on the feedback I got, I decided to keep the game as VN. But I'll also implement simple sandbox elements. Just so you'll be able to inspect stuff, but thats mainly it.The art is good but is sandbox planned or it will be straight vn? I prefer VNs because most sandboxes are usually a waste of time to hide the lack of actual content.
Thank you! Noted.My vote is for sandbox, as long as the content is there.
Shall wait to give it a try thenMaybe in the next updates i can add a feature where ashley gets a pet name and you can decide what she is.
Not for this version. But next version I am going to be adding animations. I am working on that right now.
You shall have it sirI want Sophia's content to be honest. A sweet romantic development which will turn into a erotic/ naughty one.