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desmosome

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Not bad. "Should of" really gets on my nerves. The sex scenes are really underwhelming. They finish in about 5 seconds. The sex is also too detached from the narrative. You'd think the MC getting weird zombie powers from Red would lead to some lust aura or something, but no foreshadowing or build up on this plot point. The MC is all about finding his wife and daughter, but he can bang Cassy without any inner conflict. Cassy also seemed to forget that she just banged the husband of her friend.

I never watched the show, so I don't know how much it follows the plot. The atmosphere and the survival elements are done pretty well. If only the porn side was done better and incorporated into the story rather than just having random sex scenes just for the hell of it.
 

Hellkinglucifer

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Don't know people are thinking Carley is gonna die, Carl got shoot in the face and didn't die so no chance of her dying. Be happy she won't be a one eye girl with a stupid hat.
 

Hellkinglucifer

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The Carley scenes that everyone has expressed there ANGER & HATE towards, I've heard you especially in my dms, I was going to make it so she was so desperate from not finishing she uses someone (you). She is not a love interest...yet. I thought people would like it but I was completely fucking wrong:BootyTime:
That scene was always gonna trigger a mostly negative response. you just kicked multiple hornets' nests at the same time:eek:
People who hate voyeurism
People who don't like every Li turning bisexual
People who don't like someone in the harem fucking a Li before the MC
People who don't like someone in the harem fucking without MC
People who hate ntr(if you refuse Cassey then it is a non-harem member fucking a Li/future Li)
 

JC07

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That scene was always gonna trigger a mostly negative response. you just kicked multiple hornets' nests at the same time:eek:
People who hate voyeurism
People who don't like every Li turning bisexual
People who don't like someone in the harem fucking a Li before the MC
People who don't like someone in the harem fucking without MC
People who hate ntr(if you refuse Cassey then it is a non-harem member fucking a Li/future Li)
I agree with you, the "mistake" that this DEV commented on is quite common. Thinking you need an h-scene for each update, but there's no way to put the MC in, so they figure if they put two girls in, it'll "soften it up." the discontent of the anti-ntr public. Well, for me, being cheated on by a girl with another girl is still ntr in the same way. What makes me hate ntr is not the other guy's dick, it's the feeling of betrayal.

Edit: Just to be clear, I don't think what you have here is ntr, I saw both lesbian scenes and didn't feel any ntr vibes, just a little on account of Carley, she's adorable, but I understand where DEV was going with this, he could have been a little more creative to avoid everything Hellkinglucifer said above. But well, you can't win them all. But I believe the DEV wanted to show that the little girl got very excited watching mommy and daddy fucking and she will be crazy to be in mommy's place at some point. But he could have shown just the deal conversation stating that he had seen it and that he had been very turned on, but that he didn't do anything with Cassy, so I guess an option there of preventing that from happening would be possible.
Type Carley tells Cassy what she saw and what she felt, Cassy offers the option of doing something with the "itch" but Carley may or may not accept. It would pass the intention of Carley's excitement, it would avoid all the discomfort caused by the scene and that not see matters could still see some action. Everyone would win.


So, I don't know if the DEV can take that as feedback or not. But maybe he can make it optional/avoidable in future updates for those who don't like that stuff. Unless this is somehow very important to the context of the story he wants to tell here. If so, leave it the way it is.
 
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EHFaR

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I agree with you, the "mistake" that this DEV commented on is quite common. Thinking you need an h-scene for each update, but there's no way to put the MC in, so they figure if they put two girls in, it'll "soften it up." the discontent of the anti-ntr public. Well, for me, being cheated on by a girl with another girl is still ntr in the same way. What makes me hate ntr is not the other guy's dick, it's the feeling of betrayal.

Edit: Just to be clear, I don't think what you have here is ntr, I saw both lesbian scenes and didn't feel any ntr vibes, just a little on account of Carley, she's adorable, but I understand where DEV was going with this, he could have been a little more creative to avoid everything Hellkinglucifer said above. But well, you can't win them all. But I believe the DEV wanted to show that the little girl got very excited watching mommy and daddy fucking and she will be crazy to be in mommy's place at some point. But he could have shown just the deal conversation stating that he had seen it and that he had been very turned on, but that he didn't do anything with Cassy, so I guess an option there of preventing that from happening would be possible.
Type Carley tells Cassy what she saw and what she felt, Cassy offers the option of doing something with the "itch" but Carley may or may not accept. It would pass the intention of Carley's excitement, it would avoid all the discomfort caused by the scene and that not see matters could still see some action. Everyone would win.


So, I don't know if the DEV can take that as feedback or not. But maybe he can make it optional/avoidable in future updates for those who don't like that stuff. Unless this is somehow very important to the context of the story he wants to tell here. If so, leave it the way it is.
When I finish up Ep5, I'll rework EP4 with those scenes make them avoidable, Maybe I can make it so she's asking to talk to the MC and if you deny that scene plays out and if you accept it avoids it completely. Thanks for the feedback :)
 

Hellkinglucifer

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I agree with you, the "mistake" that this DEV commented on is quite common. Thinking you need an h-scene for each update, but there's no way to put the MC in, so they figure if they put two girls in, it'll "soften it up." the discontent of the anti-ntr public. Well, for me, being cheated on by a girl with another girl is still ntr in the same way. What makes me hate ntr is not the other guy's dick, it's the feeling of betrayal.

Edit: Just to be clear, I don't think what you have here is ntr, I saw both lesbian scenes and didn't feel any ntr vibes, just a little on account of Carley, she's adorable, but I understand where DEV was going with this, he could have been a little more creative to avoid everything
I recently advised a new dev asking for feedback about not making that "mistake" and yes it is annoyingly very common. It isn't exactly ntr but i don't see any way to describe it other than ntr. Been thinking how dev could fix that and the only way i see is the dev using that scene as a trigger for Carley being Bi or not. If you choose yes then we get the lesbian scene and no it means straight carley so she refuses cassey.
 

EHFaR

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Game Developer
Feb 5, 2019
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That scene was always gonna trigger a mostly negative response. you just kicked multiple hornets' nests at the same time:eek:
People who hate voyeurism
People who don't like every Li turning bisexual
People who don't like someone in the harem fucking a Li before the MC
People who don't like someone in the harem fucking without MC
People who hate ntr(if you refuse Cassey then it is a non-harem member fucking a Li/future Li)
Yeah definitely won't make that mistake again, well multiple mistakes :HideThePain:
 
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Yeah definitely won't make that mistake again, well multiple mistakes :HideThePain:
You mentioned you were going to add freeroam/sandbox mechanics into the game. I just hope it won't be some grindfest and we need to deal with some nonsensical management system. The more streamlined the better and the less work you would need to implement should you mess up something later down the line. Just some constructive criticism, having fun with the game looking forward to next update........what a cliffhanger!!!
 

Orge_Ivy_Crown

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Mar 29, 2021
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The Mc daughter, Carley, cannot be dead because that would really just destroy the MC (dad) and the game story. Come on she has to have some teenage sex fun before getting killed off.
 

LowKeyLeo

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Is it bad that I want Derek to get fucked by a zombie lady so bad? I know he's the Norman Reedus counterpart of the TV series but damn, that man needs to be used.

Keep up the good work!
 
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Hellkinglucifer

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Is it bad that I want Derek to get fucked by a zombie lady so bad? I know he's the Norman Reedus counterpart of the TV series but damn, that man needs to be used.

Keep up the good work!
...Derek fucking mc when he peeks on the girls one too many times:confused:
 
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