Ren'Py The Witch [v0.1-Intro] [allion_Ell]

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MrBenny

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Jul 20, 2021
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I just checked the tags. There have Male Protagonist, Female Protagonist and Transformation. Isn't that enough?
Yes it is...and thank you for letting us know right away with where your story's direction will be headed. Transformation, Sissification, and lesbian heavy content is a HUGE pass for my tastes. Also, MC is a boy...not a man at the young age of 16.

But good luck in the future with your new project.
 

Garybaldi

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Jun 6, 2021
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Looks good and if the sex change was optional I'd be in but futa/sissification is a no go for me - but good luck with it and those who share that pecadillo
 

HarveyD

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So, ultimately I do like what's there but the dialogue and writing need a little work. You definitely need to have rollback enabled. Also, no one likes single choice "choices."
 

Old Man Al

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Jan 18, 2022
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Well I make it short:

One choice choices - yeah just click the one option that is there to continue. Use- and pointless and annoying.

English is... ok. Some typos, sometimes a word is missing that kind of thing.

The first 10 minutes are just inner monologue of the MC that goes nowhere.

No roll-back. Also annoying.

Oh and it ends very sudden. Before any of the story - that itself isn't bad so far - makes any sense.

Renders are nice, but the MC looks a bit girlish to my eyes.

Maybe I check it out again once there is more flesh on the bone.

Thanks for sharing.
 

Saint Blackmoor

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Oct 26, 2017
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What's the big deal? I went to university myself when I was 16.
I don't think Mr_B even graduated from middle school, so anything beyond that is foreign and scary to him.
who the fock is facepalming a new game thread?

is this a new hobby of some trolls?
it's not the first time I have seen this lately
Lately? These guys are on high alert. They take a quick glance at the tags, and if their troll radar goes off, it's facepalm time, baby! It's no asking questions first. It's shoot first and moved on to the next kill. They are the Trollin Facepalm Regiment. :LOL: Everyone should only get one Faceplam in 24hr. That way you have to think about what to use it for. The way it is now is like giving an immature and self-centered person the ammunition to create pain without reprisal.

Sorry
allion_Ell
For the negative vibe.

Your game looks very interesting, and I will diffidently give it a go.
I wish you much success.
 

allion_Ell

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Sep 8, 2022
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About rollbacks!

I have a lot of python code in my game, and it reacts very poorly to rollbacks, unlike Ren'Py native methods. So I turned them off.
 
3.50 star(s) 2 Votes