osmcuser132 : Just as you said, a thing that is easy for you might me extremely difficult for other people. Some people can use English language with ease, some can't. Some can imagine a good story, some can't.
About me, I would be totally lost with programming : I don't know one bit how to do that, Renpy or anything else !
Anyway, thank you very much for the Renpy version.
Roxorxl : I have a different opinion from Osmcuser about the pacing. I think it is just right as it allows the player to see a lot of events with Jeannie while she's progressively having some modifications on her body (either clothes or makeup or anything else).
There are already plenty of adult games with a way too slow corruption for characters and, much often, it leads to a boring game (when it is not purely abandoned) where nothing happens or where sexual events are locked into a vanilla stream.
On the opposite, there are other games where girls become nasty sluts in just one or two corruption/brainwashing events : that's not appealing as well, because it doesn't create expectation for the player and makes the characters bland.
Here, with Jeannie, the "medium pacing" is good and logical as the girls is subject to a strong hypnosis which she can't go against. It's exciting because the player, while there is a hypnosis session with Jeannie, discovers by reading the therapist's words, discovers how the girl will be soon affected.
For example, if the therapist says "You love piercings, you find them really sexy, you want to have a piercing on your tongue", then the player is in the expectation to see Jeannie next time with a piercing on her tongue. And the therapist could even reinforce this fetish : "You love piercings, you want to look like a nasty goth japanese slut, you want some on your nipples and on your lips too.", meaning that some fetishes could be "leveled up" and, once again, create expectations.
THERE IS NO NEED TO DWELL TOO LONG ON A SLOW CORRUPTION WHEN THERE ARE SO MANY THINGS TO IMAGINE FOR JEANNIE (fake breasts surgery, exhibitionism, tattoos, lust for girls and especially a crush for her sister, addicted to porn, wanting to become a prostitute, wanting to marry her sister and make porn with her, etc... Just a few ideas.). Even more when there are other characters to corrupt too (her sister, her friend...). Going too slow with the pacing will only bring too much work to do, and a dying game.
But of course, that's just my persona two cents.
By the way, how is it going with the part 2 progression ? We don't know, after all, how many time you took to make the first part so we can't imagine if the next part will be in one month or three...
