Roxorxl : Alright. Here is a short feedback about 2.3 update.
Overall, I really liked it. You have found a great way to tell the story and to create expectation for the player as the hypnosis sessions are becoming more pressuring for the characters. And not only do you stick to your plan, but you also obviously are planning a different main fetish for each girl. I'm intrigued by what you will do with Susan, and creating for Nina a need to assert herself with slutty clothes let me think that she will end mainly as an exhibitionist with looks totally different than what she is right now.
I will not give you my opinion on the whole thing with Lisa's boyfriend. I'm not into man humiliation and/or sissification. So, it would be hypocritical for me to give here a proper feedback. But once again, just stick with what you're loving : if it appeals to you and other players, then it's good.
It's a bit the same thing for futanari : not really my thing, even if imagining one of the three hypnotized girls (Susan ?) brainwashed into ultimately wanting a dick to fuck other girls has something that clicks for me. But overall, can't once agin give my feedback here.
Now, some critics...
- The streaming sessions with Lisa and Nina tend to be repetitive and somewhat boring. I understand that it allows you to show them in different outfits, but the way they interact is... I don't know, a bit artificial. I'd prefer to see how the hypnosis is affecting their relationship in their daily life, in common events (like having dinner or playing video games) instead of something that is highly specific.
- With hypnosis fetish, I thing that one of the appealing aspect is to create expectations for the player. For example, if the therapist brainwashes a girl and says to her "Next time you see a girl in the street with lipstick, you'll flirt with her and kiss her on the lips. No matter who she is or where you are, or if she's with someone", then the player is of course watching closely the next event and, BAM, when she's crossing paths in front of a school with a mother wearing lipstick and waiting for her daughter, then the player KNOWS that something exciting will happen here.
Now, sometimes you succeed with this way of giving expectations. Especially with Lisa when she is told to crave for women, or to want bigger breasts, or to be excited by her sister. But For Nina, I think that her few brainwashing sessions are giving her "cryptic" instructions. She is told to search for self-assurance, to try wearing revaling clothes, to be happy when she's listening at the therapist... and that's almost everything. I think it is indeed necessary to introduce the character to hypnosis, but now you should give her more specific orders; something to hint what the therapist wants to do with her.
For now, her hypnosis seems a bit too light. Nothing is really done to her to really feel the need to be slutty. And nothing is done to make her excited or falling in love with Lisa. If you're indeed planning to make her an ezxhibitionist slut wanting to do incest porn with her sister, dumping her husband and drastically change her looks, then you should start to give her some (light) directions. Just to stir a flame for her... and the player as well, who in my opinion need some hint to imagine how Nina will end and be excited by all the possibilities !
- Making Nina more at ease with revealing clothes is good. But don't forget the makeup ! You should also make her interested with cosmetics. Lightly at first, of course, not something as heavy and dark than what Lisa was wearing at the club. But, you know, something at least common to help her realize how beautiful and exciting wearing some lipsticks, eyeliner, blush, earrings and bracelets could be. Then of course, according to what you're planning for her, you can make it a step further with tattoos, piercings, new haircut, etc.
- For Susan, it's a bit the contrary here. You're giving us some hints of how she will end (a submissive pet ?) and the therapy sessions are explicit enough. But her looks and behaviour, on the contray, are not evolving.
She is told to not wear panties, but she has some (pink) when she's at her next appointment with the therapist.
She is told to like showing her body, but her clothes are somewhat identical and her behaviour doesn't really change in front of Lisa or Nina.
Well... She's at her first stage of brainwashing, so I suppose I should wait a bit if she's indeed showing some changes.
Anyway, I have great expectations for this game. But, frankly, I think that your initial plan to stop at 2.4 or even 2.5 is impossible at this pace (that's a good thing !). And I think that you must start to realize it by now. I just hope that you will continue the game until its ends. Thanks !
(And as always, the same question : an estimation for the release of the next update ?)