VN Ren'Py Thirty Days [v0.07.40] [3DRComics]

[Sycho]

This VN could really use a proofreader, preferably someone who is fluent in English. It's pretty bad when I have to reload after correcting nearly every single line of dialog that it breaks the immersion for me. The renders and story are good, it's just the writing... it's a mess. The dev I work with is still in the pre-development stage of his game that we probably won't have a test version to look at for the next few months. I'd be happy to volunteer cleaning this one up in the meantime. I mean, I'm already doing that now for my benefit.

 

[imadumb]

Urg x.x such a punch in the nuts x.x i had forgoten about the Ava thing x.x first scene is the cheating thing x.x I feel so sorry for her, holly molly x.x

 

[Havik79]

OK maybe this is my pre-caffeinated brain speaking here, but the last update I have was 0.039 how does it then go .0.035

 

[brknsoul]

Nice start to the game, lovely models. Alex's green eyes and that luscious trunk! I wanna do bad bad things to her!

Couple of things I've noticed; after day 2, you don't seem to get any stats for choices.
IMHO I'd strip down the stats completely, perhaps to simple Corruption and Romance stats, since there doesn't seem to be any other paths at the moment.

Smaller sub-stats are useful, perhaps for Alex's Sleepwalking, Kayla's BDSM, and Ava's Mental Stability.

I'll be keeping my eye on this one.

Also, this degenerate would love a 'dark mode' where you can convince Alex and Kayla to.. erm.. interact..

One more nit-pick.. scrap that silly 'math' puzzle. Something like Blank Paper > UV Lamp > Paper says check phone next to bed > Phone directly shows code. Also, I didn't see the phone at all until I read something on these forums, perhaps make it brighter.

 

[EricGrey]

OK maybe this is my pre-caffeinated brain speaking here, but the last update I have was 0.039 how does it then go .0.035

The last one was, according to what's sitting on my computer, 0.03.9. The new one is 0.35.91.

 

[zettairyouki]

why the hell does my escape room keep repeating even after completing it?

 

[El Tanque]

Incredibly good game, I don't know why I hadn't given it a chance before.
The twins are beautiful, and the MC is presented with enough options, and thank goodness for that, because other than the twins, none of the secondary girls caught my attention and I deactivated all that sharing crap.

The only problem I see, is that since I'm not interested in any of the other girls, the waiting time for twin content only increases.
For example the dev says he spent at least 80 hours doing a scene with one of the other girls, and he's not done, he still has 80 more hours to go to finish it. Then double that for the content if you choose to be female, my god....

Anyway, I congratulate the dev for the great work he has done so far, and I wish him lots of profits for his project, not mine, but from others, I am just a poor old man....

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Due to responses to Dakota some changes are coming, as the story progresses you can basically choose to replace her with some one else. You will meet the options day 3 or 4, and you will have the option to continue with Dakota as alex's "coach" or replace her.

Can you replace Dakota with someone else in this update?

 

[Jorund]

Feedback about the long 'video' scene, i'll be very open and direct:
Please don't. Maybe for foreplay, or a longer purely romantic scene, but 6-8 mins just kills it.
I am not sure about others, but i play those games (by far not only but) mostly to fap at some point. And automatic running long scenes just make that not rewarding. I am not hardcore into edging, but not even rarely, with a nice scene with characters i like i LOVE to go through a scene back and forth, edging on, seeing the scene play out, rewind some parts of the scene over and over... just to switch to a complete other scene (via save or gallery) to just keep doing that... and that's really incompatible with minutes long auto-scenes. Hell, even without edging i'd usually go back and forth in a scene a good couple of times, also switching scenes and so on.
I am pretty sure that even with long auto-scenes from here on i'd complete that game for it's nice renders and overall feel, but i'd pretty sure not cherish it as much (and delete it at some point to make space) as i think i would with more 'normal' formatted scenes.

 

[Draakaap23]

Why put so much effort into what is basically a side character?

 

[Fazed]

My opinion of the game aside, I think it's really lame that that the right click menu does not have the load function....why?

EDIT: Actually its in the phone menu. not as bad as I thought, This works well enough so nevermind.

 

[casper666xxx]

any 1 know the password for the box

 

[DrDerpington]

Feedback for the long video scene: Meh. Some scenes shots are good, some are bad. Majority of people dont want to be forced to watch the scene they dont like. And they also want to enjoy the scene from good angle longer, but they might be dissatisfiend when camera moved too fast.

If you want to make auto-moving scenes, then make them really short. Just few seconds. 20seconds top. That is the level where the players will feel comfortable.

 

[guardianfather]

Feedback for the long video scene: Meh. Some scenes shots are good, some are bad. Majority of people dont want to be forced to watch the scene they dont like. And they also want to enjoy the scene from good angle longer, but they might be dissatisfiend when camera moved too fast.

If you want to make auto-moving scenes, then make them really short. Just few seconds. 20seconds top. That is the level where the players will feel comfortable.

I prefer non of it. I want to click forward in my own pace.
Also, that is a side character that I have no interest in.

 

[kristoferss]

does anyone else have a problem with alexis when she sleepwalks the second time and when i click "tell her go to bed" the next day everything is as if i slept with her, before the update there was the same problem

 

[Notheonlyone]

in the female playthrough it seems to refer to you as a guy at least a couple times so far in the car on the first time on the phone with their dad. second on the phone with nicole.

 

[Notheonlyone]

in the female playthrough it seems to refer to you as a guy at least a couple times so far in the car on the first time on the phone with their dad. second on the phone with nicole.

then after night 2 i sent her to bed and woke up to look down at a dick... very inconsistent

 

[Havik79]

Well that was short, gave up after like a minute of the Ava scene and skipped it, too slow, too long, too boring.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Incredibly good game, I don't know why I hadn't given it a chance before.
The twins are beautiful, and the MC is presented with enough options, and thank goodness for that, because other than the twins, none of the secondary girls caught my attention and I deactivated all that sharing crap.

The only problem I see, is that since I'm not interested in any of the other girls, the waiting time for twin content only increases.
For example the dev says he spent at least 80 hours doing a scene with one of the other girls, and he's not done, he still has 80 more hours to go to finish it. Then double that for the content if you choose to be female, my god....

Dakota doesn't interest me at all. When the MC justifies rejecting her because of the love he has for Nicole... well, in my case it's not the reason to reject her (especially after the MC's conversation with Nicole). I haven't liked her since the first encounter, and I think that as there are more (regular) scenes with her, the less I like her. The dev said that we can replace her with another LI, so I hope we can do it.

 

[DrDerpington]

in the female playthrough it seems to refer to you as a guy at least a couple times so far in the car on the first time on the phone with their dad. second on the phone with nicole.

It has been mentioned multiple times, that Female route is very unfinished.
Author focuses more on male route (it is more favorited by players) and then finishes female route later.