For now it's too short for a fair review, but I like it. Some quick feedback:
- The language needs some work. It's clear that the author is a native speaker of a non-European language, as they have trouble with the genders of pronouns. Referring to a towel as "he" is wrong but not a major problem, but alternating between using "he" and "she" when referring to a girl is very confusing. Even worse when she is in a fight with a boy and the boy is once referred to as "her". English uses gender for disambiguation, so this kind of mistake is a major source of confusion. This is just the tip of the iceberg. Often I had trouble guessing what a sentence was supposed to mean, and it wasn't always as obvious as when the word "relationship" was used instead of "reaction".
- I really like the graphics. And I like the fact that they are so incredibly lean. It's a really tiny download.
- The story is still short, but it's very promising. I really want to know how it continues.