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SpyderArachnid
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Eh, wasn't a fan. Translation is just not good, too many issues with the writing. Several times you are called he/him and it doesn't use your custom name as it keeps referring to you as Katy regardless.
So yeah, couldn't stand it. I couldn't continue anymore after the karate club stuff. I struggled to barely reach that point. It's a mess. Needs a ton of work. Still, good luck with... this and thanks.
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So yeah, couldn't stand it. I couldn't continue anymore after the karate club stuff. I struggled to barely reach that point. It's a mess. Needs a ton of work. Still, good luck with... this and thanks.
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Have you even played the game?
Or did you just come here to feel superior and shit on people trying to do something?
ETA. Just to clarify. You're of course entitled to your own opinion. However, it should be an informed opinion. Otherwise you're just exposing your own ignorance.
While I happen to love (and gladly support) this game, there are numerous reasons some people won't.
Some of those reasons are more reasonable than others.
If you played the game you could complain - perhaps even in a constructive manner - about the writing mistakes, the artistic style, or any of a dozen things.
This is a beautifully flawed game. I appreciate and recognize that.
It is just that you jumped into the thread for a game you obviously haven't played, obviously don't give two shits about, and decided to behave in a rather stupid, extremely childish way.
You came here to tell people who have played the game that they shouldn't like it because... because you can't stand the title.
In the future - wherever you go - please try to provide constructive, useful, reasonable/rational criticism.
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L7Bear
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While I disagree with you and I actually enjoy/support the game - at least you actually played it and provided reasonable (although not constructive) criticism.
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TEST YOUR MIGHT!erm.. test her life?
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Finish him!
Excellent!
swiver
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I can see that people react to the translation into english here, and I have to say, it's far away from perfect, but it's well enough to get the story. I have seen far worse.
This is going slow and steady, I think that little torture scene was kind of a spike for the setup phase, which continues to be teasing what could happen. Really interested in seeing how the story develops, it's a little too soon to actually say anything about it, the setup so far is mostly fine.
Can't really understand what the idea behind that Tanaka guy is so far, she should mop the floor with him if she really has that many black belts.
This is going slow and steady, I think that little torture scene was kind of a spike for the setup phase, which continues to be teasing what could happen. Really interested in seeing how the story develops, it's a little too soon to actually say anything about it, the setup so far is mostly fine.
Can't really understand what the idea behind that Tanaka guy is so far, she should mop the floor with him if she really has that many black belts.
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The thing is, Renpy uses " as a basis for determining which dialogue to display, so when I put that in a word, the game itself treats the dialogue as two separate words, and... I don't know where to find the others on the keyboard xd
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You'd be surprised! Well... in my head it seems epic, haha.erm.. test her life?
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Well... I'll try, but if you could do me a favor and point out any errors in certain dialogues, I would really appreciate it.
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Sometimes the character's name slips my mind during dialogue, so it looks like I'll have to review everything from the beginning.
I am not sure, but I would expect that this works the same way as in Python. Then you can simply use double quotation marks around strings instead of single quotation marks = apostrophes, allowing you to use single quotation marks / apostrophes inside the strings. And if you add a \ (backslash escape) in front of a ' or ", then it works in all situations:
- 'Example with a "double quoted" phrase inside a string.'
- "This example's purpose is to show you how to do apostrophes and 'single quoted' phrases inside a string."
- "You can combine apostrophe's and 'single quotes' and \"double quotes\" by escaping the problematic characters by means of a \\ character."
- 'You can combine apostrophe\'s and \'single quotes\' and "double quotes" by escaping the problematic characters by means of a \\ character.'
- "It\'s no problem if you escape one of these characters when it isn\'t needed."
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What do you have to say for 7 Days to Die, a game that was over 12 years in 'Alpha' stage xD
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Tanaka is just a character that came out of nowhere. There will be some scenes where he tries to teach the protagonist. He's a character who shouldn't be taken seriously. I gave him a conceited clown vibe as a first impression (I hope I succeeded). Obviously, the protagonist is better than him. She will realize this and play along.
All in all I think there's a ton of potential with this! I think you have a great imagination/vision. The scenario and atmosphere is good, and while the English is a bit problematic I think you convey most dialogue adequately.
Main things I would say the need to be fixed is a bit of visual consistency(mostly with character design), some grammatical issues and word choice.
Really hope you keep to this because I think you really have something going on here. Keep at it and Ty for the post!
Main things I would say the need to be fixed is a bit of visual consistency(mostly with character design), some grammatical issues and word choice.
Really hope you keep to this because I think you really have something going on here. Keep at it and Ty for the post!
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It's the first visual novel I've ever made, and it's more complicated than you might imagine. As for the English, I'm trying my best, but there are times when I'll miss a pronoun here and there. But I'm here to improve.