Ren'Py Abandoned Thorns & Thrones: The Legend of Randall [v0.1 Prologue] [Ichaya Games]

[zhoope]

FFT/Tactics Ogre look-alike? Sign me in for later releases! I'll be waiting a few more just to try it, but it looks cool!

I LOVED THESE GAMES FFT ITS MY FAVORITE TATICS GAME AND YES I TAKE A LOT INSPIRATION FROM THEN

 

[zhoope]

I hope this great game released in apk too...

I can't promise anything because my knowledge about android it's very limited , but this is among my priorities for the demo in late apr

 

[zhoope]

I hope there will be NTR!

NOO THE NTR BOYS FIND ME JOKING APART
about fetishs: will be implemented according to the patreons will

My only rule is: I don't do loli / shota porn in no way.

 

[zhoope]

The dialogues need some proofreading.
It's pretty noticeable in the screenshots.

Thanks for the feedback <3

The demo launch will be in late apr and i willing to pay an english teacher to help me with the proofreading.

 

[zhoope]

Alright, after "playing" the prologue I have to say there's some serious proofreading necessary plus using a wider range of words. Dialogue should be enjoyable to read, not being a chore. :/

Thanks for the feedback <3

The demo launch will be in late apr and i willing to pay an english teacher to help me with the proofreading and
The "skip" option will be implemented in demo 0.1 with the characters portraits next to the ballons

 

[zhoope]

Hey! Look this! : P

I like the graphics, wish people could get an editor to check their language though.

Thanks for the feedback <3

The demo launch will be in late apr and i willing to pay an english teacher to help me with the proofreading.

 

[zhoope]

I read: The Legend of.... and got a fucking heart attack. thankfully no blue fox to be seen.

well the Krystal the blue fox No but... one of the secondary character "Flamera" its a half dragon

 

[zhoope]

Graphics looks great for a pixel 2d game Im gonna let i grow a bit though before I try it, but the moment it hits like update 3 or 5 Im gonna play it.

Please follow me on patreon I will post updates every Friday

 

[zhoope]

Does this mean they relate psychologically/circumstantially (i.e. "Understanding") as the phrasing would imply normally, or is this referring to Incest? I'm down for a game like this either way, but the phrasing combined with how many devs are ESL makes this not an unreasonable question in my experience. Especially considering that the detail that they "can relate" doesn't seem necessary if it's used in the normal sense.

I apologize for the confusion the heroines are not related to the main character by blood, and I will do my best to bring a significant improvements in English. I hope to be able to live in the USA again after finish my studies

 

[Laki IH]

I apologize for the confusion the heroines are not related to the main character by blood, and I will do my best to bring a significant improvements in English. I hope to be able to live in the USA again after finish my studies

Fair enough. Your English is mostly fine by the way, it's just little grammar things here and there. Generally, I'd say your English is in the top 20% on the site at least, ahead of many with English as there first language.

Thanks for the reply, and good luck with development! I'll be giving the game a proper look in a couple days when I have some actual time.

 

[WSmith]

Thanks for the feedback <3

The demo launch will be in late apr and i willing to pay an english teacher to help me with the proofreading.

Like above mentioned. Your messages come across perfectly fine. You just need some heavy polishing when it comes to grammar, syntax, etc. Good luck with development!

 

[BobbyBigplays1995]

well the Krystal the blue fox No but... one of the secondary character "Flamera" its a half dragon

the legend of krystal games are notorius for abandonement or just scammy stuff. Thts why

 

[CobraPL]

Thanks for the feedback <3

The demo launch will be in late apr and i willing to pay an english teacher to help me with the proofreading.

In the meantime, use Grammarly, even free version.

 

[Nero the Bard]

culd there be a loli tack in the Future ?

 

[Deleted member 2191732]

culd there be a loli tack in the Future ?

about fetishs: will be implemented according to the patreons will

My only rule is: I don't do loli / shota porn in no way.

Should answer your question there, methinks.

 

[Nero the Bard]

Should answer your question there, methinks.

it did indead. Thanks a bunch

 

[TankHunter678]

Hoping for some mind control, even right from the beginning the story happens because of it. And since the main character has the heart of a succubus in him, so it would not be a stretch for him to start turning into an incubus and be able to mind control some women during his path of corruption.

 

[SauceMixer]

damn that's some vanguard bandits vibe right there

 

[zhoope]

Hoping for some mind control, even right from the beginning the story happens because of it. And since the main character has the heart of a succubus in him, so it would not be a stretch for him to start turning into an incubus and be able to mind control some women during his path of corruption.

jackpot however, won't be just mind control.

 

[Jash83]

First thought: "Wow, a turn-based strategy ero-RPG! Looks interesting!"
Second thought: "Wait... in Ren'Py...? Oh no..."