VN Ren'Py Abandoned Thoughts Of Infinity [v0.1a] [Seaborgium]

vultron

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May 19, 2018
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Literally one of the first choices in this game isn't even a choice it's work for the creepy guy or work for the creepy guy.

A guy who apparently has already take advantage of you in the past so obviously this is a brilliant plan also you already got a fucking job. lol
 

Seaborgium

New Member
Game Developer
Jun 24, 2018
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The icons are hard to see - whole UI is quite messed up (on a decent level ^^). Dont place icons all around the screen. Better arange them all on the bottom. maybe split them to left and right corner or so.

Bugs:
  • When you enter you work (first time currently) you have a sexy black dress and when you enter the boss office you wear a brownish dress/shirt. Also she seems to know the reception lady - that is confusing.
  • You can got to the lab even before you visited the boss - that seems not correct.
  • When you leave the lab you went directly to your flat ...
Its strange that the game references to some events you dont know anything about (that Egor guy).

Edit: Ok .. when I understand that now, these are just snippets and nothing of a real coherent story up to now?

Solid foundation. Maybe the outside of the buildings dont look modern enough for a story with humanoids.

And if possible,. plz let us choose a name or change it ... there a so many corruption stories with a Jessica. Don't know why thats such a popular name ...
Firstly thank you for your feedback
-For the UI , im working on improving it in the next update (icons clearer with names ) , but i think its imppssible to arrange them all in one side ? because they are so many (you have locations in the buttom, on your right actions , chars on the left ..)

-For the bugs ,
I can't force players to play it in order so the reception scene is repeatable and it's not related to your visit to Alberto , (In the walkthrough the office visit come up in the first day , then the second day you will get to the reception scene ) , but maybe i will come up with something else to make it better..
-The lab scene , yea it will be shown after office scene (next update)

-For the Egor guy , i mentioned that there an intro to the game to undersatand it better ( but anyway Jes has said that he took advantage of her so that she knows him in the past..)
-And about the building , yea it seems usual for now but next events will show more of his power

Finally, about choosing the mc name ,, why not ? i'll add that next time..
 

Trasher2018

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Aug 21, 2018
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Firstly thank you for your feedback
-For the UI , im working on improving it in the next update (icons clearer with names ) , but i think its imppssible to arrange them all in one side ? because they are so many (you have locations in the buttom, on your right actions , chars on the left ..)

-For the bugs ,
I can't force players to play it in order so the reception scene is repeatable and it's not related to your visit to Alberto , (In the walkthrough the office visit come up in the first day , then the second day you will get to the reception scene ) , but maybe i will come up with something else to make it better..
-The lab scene , yea it will be shown after office scene (next update)

-For the Egor guy , i mentioned that there an intro to the game to undersatand it better ( but anyway Jes has said that he took advantage of her so that she knows him in the past..)
-And about the building , yea it seems usual for now but next events will show more of his power

Finally, about choosing the mc name ,, why not ? i'll add that next time..
I am just confused bc for me there was no real connection and/or story. Maybe you should have a more linear start to get things going. If this is the planned start of the game imho its just messy and doesnt tale any story.

Why do you separate the Intro from the game? I cant see any benefit in such a plan.
 

Hartigan

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Nov 6, 2017
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Next Dev who is not able to use his Software right !
Please learn to use it ->

Life is to short to play every Version again from start ;)
 

Seaborgium

New Member
Game Developer
Jun 24, 2018
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When you realize Egor is actually Lord Raiden..

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On my way to fix it but funny thoughXD
Next Dev who is not able to use his Software right !
Please learn to use it ->

Life is to short to play every Version again from start ;)
Thx for the information but variables are fixed in the last update so loading next time will not be a problem

there are better ones out there ^^
Responding to your old question , i separated the intro because i wanted to make a new release by improving the renders with a poor hardware and try it with a non linear story
and everyone has an opinion or a favorite genre , so don't be influencer on the others
 
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Kendra

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Apr 10, 2017
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Nice game so far, with new UI it's even playable. Love the mc model, would be nice to see more content with her, her roommate "friend" and her "boss" in future.