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Will do that, thank you for your support. Yes, that is the end for that version. Currently I'm working on the city and one of its main buildings where we're gonna meet another character.sysblank addYou must be registered to see the linksin your account. i will support you Via F95.
and second after the sex with her say double click to edit.(i don't get it)so there is the end?
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Patched and links fixed, thanks for reporting!sysblank error error.
Edit: Patched and fixed again since I found one more bug similar to that one.
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I'm going to take your advice and wait for another update or two before playing, but just from the sampler screenshots in the OP, the game seems to fluctuate between being written in the second and first person ("You open your eyes"/"I didn't dislike"). That's an easy slip to make, but extremely distracting for the reader. I'd highly recommend sticking to the second person throughout, but it is of course your decision.
Good luck with the game, I look forward to seeing where you take it!
When at this point
If I select "You are very beautiful", it just dead-ends and I have to use the "Go backwards within the game history" arrow.
If instead I choose "Interesting" and proceed, I eventually get to "Arrival"
Error: the passage "City Intro" does not exist
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If I select "You are very beautiful", it just dead-ends and I have to use the "Go backwards within the game history" arrow.
If instead I choose "Interesting" and proceed, I eventually get to "Arrival"
Error: the passage "City Intro" does not exist
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I got it, I was sure I fixed it but apparently not. I will fix it and update the links. Thanks for the report.
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simple sotry means quick fap, ok
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sysblank
Re-downloaded and tried.
Not working at all past this point in any browser.
Tried last versions of Chrome, Cent, Firefox, Opera and some old IE. Incognito mode and different dialogue options as well.
Win8.1x64Pro
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Thanks for the information. Every time I fix it, it somehow breaks again after I upload it... I will try again with a different format.
I fixed it again, i also tested it so it has to work. Links updated.
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Redownloaded.
Got to the place where you choose "interesting woman".
NOW produces
My bold move had an efect, I could see it as there was a slight tinge of redness on her face and I could hear her heartbeat sligthly accelerating.
Error: <<remove>>: no elements matched the selector "#p_choice2"
"You are an interesting woman." I whispered in her ear. I could see her ears becoming red, there was no doubt that my actions had a positive effect.
Got to the place where you choose "interesting woman".
NOW produces
My bold move had an efect, I could see it as there was a slight tinge of redness on her face and I could hear her heartbeat sligthly accelerating.
Error: <<remove>>: no elements matched the selector "#p_choice2"
"You are an interesting woman." I whispered in her ear. I could see her ears becoming red, there was no doubt that my actions had a positive effect.