VN Ren'Py Tifa's Dark Heaven [v0.4] [Sieglinnde]

[Joshy92]

Sieglinnde does some of the hottest interracial stuff around.

 

[natz23]

I know Tifa has big boobs but this one way too big for my taste. Good luck anyways.

 

[Jonje]

The people who criticize this types of games for lacking depth and narrative you don't see them criticizing games of other genres for the same reasons. I like the story in some games but I've learned to appreciate other games for what they are: fap material.

People absolutely do criticize other games of this genre. This one is just poorly written, which is why it's getting so much flak. If the story doesn't matter as much as you people claim, then why are you on a porn game site and not xvideos?

 

[r0ckh0und]

People absolutely do criticize other games of this genre. This one is just poorly written, which is why it's getting so much flak. If the story doesn't matter as much as you people claim, then why are you on a porn game site and not xvideos?

Some visuals say more than 1000 words! Although this is a visual novel it's obvious you took the wrong turn by entering the f95 game's section.

 

[Dogorti]

People absolutely do criticize other games of this genre. This one is just poorly written, which is why it's getting so much flak. If the story doesn't matter as much as you people claim, then why are you on a porn game site and not xvideos?

I like the story in avns as you can read in my comment. but let's be honest 95% of avns are poorly written, only a few can be saved, and sometimes you just want an avn for fap material I don't see what the problem is.

 

[Fapbert]

I feel like this would be so much better if it was a Tifa-Cloud-Barrett love triangle. Sure Barrett has some scenes but it's mostly Tifa-Marvin. Who the fuck is Marvin?? Who gives a shit about Marvin?? And now we're gonna get Marvin's friends? Fuck that. I'm sure there will be hot scenes but there is no emotional connection. Just another "game" to download when it's here/free and fap a couple times to decent art and then move on to the next. Sorry if this is overly harsh, dev is a good dev.

 

[Sladen]

It would be nice to see Yuffie and Jessie get some action, they are very underused, especially in these adult games. I doubt it would fit at all in this story though. This is all about Tifa, which is my favorite FF7 character.

 

[Jonje]

Some visuals say more than 1000 words! Although this is a visual novel it's obvious you took the wrong turn by entering the f95 game's section.

It’s obvious you didn’t comprehend what I was saying. If you guys say it doesn’t matter if the story sucks for porn then why are you people commenting on a porn game site, and defending this garbage writing no less? Just jerk off to the model and go. Otherwise, go be a moron somewhere else. Some of us actually enjoy good writing and the atmosphere a good story and plot can set up in porn games. This game was not one of those. For what it’s worth, Tifa’s model is amazing, but that’s it. The dialogue is crap, and almost everything else in this game is too, and this is coming from an NTR lover.

 

[Jonje]

I like the story in avns as you can read in my comment. but let's be honest 95% of avns are poorly written, only a few can be saved, and sometimes you just want an avn for fap material I don't see what the problem is.

I agree with you. The problem is there are people implying or straight up saying that the writing doesn’t matter for a porn game.

 

[Kotobiki]

It would be nice to see Yuffie and Jessie get some action, they are very underused, especially in these adult games. I doubt it would fit at all in this story though. This is all about Tifa, which is my favorite FF7 character.

Kyrie*

 

[Hfap5]

It has an error at startup and on Android(joiplay )you can't change those codes, at least I don't know with which application you can change it

"

I'm sorry, but errors were detected in your script. Please correct the
errors listed below, and try again.


File "game/script.rpy", line 32: scene statement expects a non-empty block.
    scene warning with dissolve:
                                ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 47: scene statement expects a non-empty block.
    scene cloudbed1 with dissolve:
                                  ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 122: scene statement expects a non-empty block.
    scene tifabarret1 with dissolve:
 .
.
.

 

[r0ckh0und]

It’s obvious you didn’t comprehend what I was saying. If you guys say it doesn’t matter if the story sucks for porn then why are you people commenting on a porn game site, and defending this garbage writing no less? Just jerk off to the model and go. Otherwise, go be a moron somewhere else. Some of us actually enjoy good writing and the atmosphere a good story and plot can set up in porn games. This game was not one of those. For what it’s worth, Tifa’s model is amazing, but that’s it. The dialogue is crap, and almost everything else in this game is too, and this is coming from an NTR lover.

I got you, but you are talking about the writing were most of the text are dialogues between the characters themselves
and in a state where the game is still in development.
I'm pretty sure the dev can handle critics and is open for improvements, but just stating the writting is garbage and the story is poor
without giving examples and showing how to make it better is by far the most pathetic behavior.

 

[Illhoon]

ok ok lets face it the reason there is so much criticism in here is because this is a NTR +BBC/Interracial + Big Tittet Bimbo model Game with a very popular character and all of those tags are the once with the biggest haters now imagine them all in one game and then the game also is based on a famous and beloved franchise lol people just really like to trash on those games especially the NTR and BBC Tag combination but DW Sieglinnde We Stan you your games are insane Keep going !!!

 

[Ueywuwudu]

ok ok lets face it the reason there is so much criticism in here is because this is a NTR +BBC/Interracial + Big Tittet Bimbo model Game with a very popular character and all of those tags are the once with the biggest haters now imagine them all in one game and then the game also is based on a famous and beloved franchise lol people just really like to trash on those games especially the NTR and BBC Tag combination but DW Sieglinnde We Stan you your games are insane Keep going !!!

Everyone turns into roger ebert whenever it comes to an ntr game.

 

[Jonje]

ok ok lets face it the reason there is so much criticism in here is because this is a NTR +BBC/Interracial + Big Tittet Bimbo model Game with a very popular character and all of those tags are the once with the biggest haters now imagine them all in one game and then the game also is based on a famous and beloved franchise lol people just really like to trash on those games especially the NTR and BBC Tag combination but DW Sieglinnde We Stan you your games are insane Keep going !!!

Not at all the problem here. The issue is the writing is bad. Already explained in previous comments.

 

[Jonje]

I got you, but you are talking about the writing were most of the text are dialogues between the characters themselves
and in a state where the game is still in development.
I'm pretty sure the dev can handle critics and is open for improvements, but just stating the writting is garbage and the story is poor
without giving examples and showing how to make it better is by far the most pathetic behavior.

Not mine or anyone else’s job or duty to make the dev a better writer, nor do we owe them anything regarding that. There really isn’t a way to defend this writing, unless your standards are incredibly low. The blueprint for the characters is already laid out - FF7 already has pre-established characters. I already explained the problem with using characters that have existing personalities in a previous comment, so your random claim about no examples makes zero sense. All he had to do was use the game as inspiration. The only thing he took from the actual game were the names and likeness, and he only did that so this project would get attention because it has Tifa in it. Virtually everything else was bland.

 

[r0ckh0und]

Not mine or anyone else’s job or duty to make the dev a better writer, nor do we owe them anything regarding that. There really isn’t a way to defend this writing, unless your standards are incredibly low. The blueprint for the characters is already laid out - FF7 already has pre-established characters. I already explained the problem with using characters that have existing personalities in a previous comment, so your random claim about no examples makes zero sense. All he had to do was use the game as inspiration. The only thing he took from the actual game were the names and likeness, and he only did that so this project would get attention because it has Tifa in it. Virtually everything else was bland.

The only thing that has low standards here are your poorly written critics...how about putting a new vinyl on yours is already cracked!
What else to expect from someone who entered this forum 7 years ago and has only 20 post as reference...lol!

 

[Fapbert]

It's not the font that causes this.
An entry in the screen.rpy is the reason why. Highlighted in the screen below.
View attachment 4012215
By deleting this entry you'll also need to adjust the dialog text color else you won't see much with black text on a black opaque background.

Why don't the people making the games better get some moneys too? I know they didn't ask. I'm just being a righteous asshole.

 

[Fapbert]

I mean, guy says writing is bad. Who gives a shit if you don't believe it. "The NTR market" is glutted with BBC right now. If someone steps up with NTR that isn't BBC? Will make money.

 

[soraownz]

I feel like this would be so much better if it was a Tifa-Cloud-Barrett love triangle. Sure Barrett has some scenes but it's mostly Tifa-Marvin. Who the fuck is Marvin?? Who gives a shit about Marvin?? And now we're gonna get Marvin's friends? Fuck that. I'm sure there will be hot scenes but there is no emotional connection. Just another "game" to download when it's here/free and fap a couple times to decent art and then move on to the next. Sorry if this is overly harsh, dev is a good dev.

Actually i kinda agree. The role that Barret has in this game could've easily gone to someone like Biggs, while Barret takes over the role Marvin has. Could've turned Tifa into the slut that fucks all of Avalanche behind Clouds back.