Let's only mention the latter. The former is... yeah. Let's just mention the Bill Murray movie.
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I played to the end of current content.
Great concept.
Some of the art could use work. I think Karina has a creepy face for example(does not look quite human).
The white text for the "voice" is great and makes it clear it is neither your thoughts or speech. That said the MC having thoughts vs speaking is not well-defined or consistent. So maybe either a color or different use of " or ' ,or simply a statement at the start of a thought"thinks" ect. I understand a good part of the dialog thus far are the MC's thoughts,but it would be nice to know if he was speaking(thinking) out loud,thinking(internally),or having a conversation.
I like the concept to be sure,the potential is there.
Keep up the good work!
The second loop and the nun had me laughing.
Side note. I used PIXELDRAIN and was able to download it in less than a minute.
Great concept.
Some of the art could use work. I think Karina has a creepy face for example(does not look quite human).
The white text for the "voice" is great and makes it clear it is neither your thoughts or speech. That said the MC having thoughts vs speaking is not well-defined or consistent. So maybe either a color or different use of " or ' ,or simply a statement at the start of a thought"thinks" ect. I understand a good part of the dialog thus far are the MC's thoughts,but it would be nice to know if he was speaking(thinking) out loud,thinking(internally),or having a conversation.
I like the concept to be sure,the potential is there.
Keep up the good work!
The second loop and the nun had me laughing.
Side note. I used PIXELDRAIN and was able to download it in less than a minute.
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Pretty short at the moment (easily less than an hour), and yes there's audio.
Some of these characters need to lay off the plastic surgery as it's not helping them any and if I were the MC - Sam - Melissa - Karina I'd sue the fuck out of the doctor that did it.
A bit annoying that right clicking the mouse button brings up the character info screen instead of the save screen so you have to go down and click the save option at the bottom the of the screen instead.
If the MC has just died for the first time why is the ??? dude saying welcome back for because if it was the first time he died the ??? dude should be saying welcome instead.
rKnight
Father probably died first before they moved there as the MC stated that he hated that he and his mom had to move there.
A bit annoying that right clicking the mouse button brings up the character info screen instead of the save screen so you have to go down and click the save option at the bottom the of the screen instead.
If the MC has just died for the first time why is the ??? dude saying welcome back for because if it was the first time he died the ??? dude should be saying welcome instead.
rKnight
Father probably died first before they moved there as the MC stated that he hated that he and his mom had to move there.
I would actually make sense if this thing is supposed to be "God" and was the creator of all. That would mean the MC was there before he was born to be "created." At least that is how I interpreted it, could be wrong though!
I have to agree on this. Time not being linear to a being like that is not only a possibility, but is actually likely.
To linear beings"Where ever you go, there you are"
Non-linear "Welcome back,try again(mockingly as they know the outcome before you start,and knows how to motivate/control you for the outcome they want without you going insane).
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This is the first time you have died and they say welcome back and then the next line after that is *You never change, do you? The first words out of your brain are always the same.* *Who the fuck is this creepy ass motherfucker?*
From those lines and ones after it's acting like you've already been there multiple times already instead of just arriving there for the first time.
Unless he's died multiple times already before the events in the school have happened.
Maybe his mom shot him a few times for entering her locked room without permission or for touching her preciouses.
This is the first time you have died and they say welcome back and then the next line after that is *You never change, do you? The first words out of your brain are always the same.* *Who the fuck is this creepy ass motherfucker?*
From those lines and ones after it's acting like you've already been there multiple times already instead of just arriving there for the first time.
Unless he's died multiple times already before the events in the school have happened.
Maybe his mom shot him a few times for entering her locked room without permission or for touching her preciouses.
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Lets see... at least this game starts out original...
This time the MC died and not his father!
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*6th SCREEN* I just sat here for 5 minutes FOR REAL thinking to myself WTF before scrolling to the next screen...
Every dream has a meaning:
Dreams about a girl wearing pink lingerie while stepping on a baby and figthing a snake
You guys are cracking me upDamn son, lady's straight up curb stomping that little carpet crawler!
Sorry, no plans for time stop stuff in the short term.
As an apology, in case you haven't read it yet, check out this masterpiece.
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No children were harmed in the making of this gameOK, I like the Dev's premise and will give this project a look-see. It will be instant delete though if I see any actual violence against a child.
Screen 6 is straight up "Da Fuk?!"
Imagine the bush on that nun?
And rest assured, none will ever be.
*furiously writes down notes*
Jokes aside, I think there is a japanese VN with that exact plot. I haven't played it, despite being an incest connoisseur.
I don't have a hard measure, but it should be around 25 minutes? I suck at estimating these things though. Yes, there's audio.
Thank you for the kind words and the criticisms. I tried to use " for speech, ' for thoughts and nothing for narration, but I could color code it to make it simpler. Honestly, I understand that it isn't intuitive for everyone so I'll note this down and see what I can do for the next releases.
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In this scene, the guy says "you will you" easy fix.
In this part, it shows her name (I didn't ask for her name before this) after this, it goes back to ??? until she tells me her name.
In this part, it shows her name (I didn't ask for her name before this) after this, it goes back to ??? until she tells me her name.
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Here is the Italian translation
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Will we at least get to fuck Melissa before her untimely death?
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Q, are you fucking with me again?
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