- Feb 24, 2022
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Wow! Thanks for this HUGE FeedbackHello.
This game is interesting even though the content is very little.
The worldbuilding is limited but enough for what we have to do.
There are few characters but they are varied.
The plot is interesting though it's only the start of the story.
The art is well chosen and different from usual.
The idea is really interesting.
The MC is supposed to be a loser but, without doing that much outside Judith, he is able to seduce them very quickly. Not that I don't like what and how it happens but, if it was that easy, it could have already occured in the past.
The progression of the stats is original and a good idea.
When we are on the second floor of a location and we enter a room, if we leave that room, we shouldn't find ourselves on the first floor.
You should personalize the dialogs for the same action but for different girl (example, spending time with Judith or Kim in the cafeteria is reduced to a "Hello", at least the stepsister add stepbrother to her hello; or when we ejaculate, it's always "How delicious" whatever the girl we have sex; or the erotic magazines, it's "Wow! One of my favorite issues of this magazine!" for all of them).
When we go on a date, we should be in our bed in the morning and not in the restaurant.
There should be an icon indicating if there's a character we can interact or not in a location when we are on the map because, trying to go to the club every time period for several days, only to understand that it was there only for an event of Judith was irritating.
There should be a reaction of the MC when we complete a level of a stat. He's supposed to become more charismatic/intelligent/strong and it's written after every action but it doesn't feel like the MC is experiencing it.
I found an error when we try to click on that button in the kitchen (cf files) View attachment 1730101
It's supposed to be for the step sister but the avatar used is the one for the step mother.
I've also found 2 broken images in the cafeteria (cf files).
For information, I used the online version.
Good continuation.
We will fix these bugs in 0.1.8.
And we will also improve dialogues and actions.