Also, if it's within your capacity, could you make it so the sex sounds loop during scenes instead of simply ending?
Something to consider if you do go and give the game a final update.
Oh and after seeing the screenshot a second time...
I think the colon after the MC's name should be a comma instead so it doesn't look like the MC is saying that. Sorry, minor stuff like that just gets to me easily.
Anyway, sorry if I'm being annoying. I wasn't kidding when I said I liked the game.
Btw I really like your "Humans and Homesteads" story over in CHYOA and "Justice League Uninhibited" is pretty entertaining.