fbass

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It's great, it has many strengths, but it has one problem: the dialogues between the husband and the wife are not enough, This has made the relationship between them not deep (the player has such an understanding and feeling). If the relationship between them was deep, the scenes of NTR and Share would have been more enjoyable.
I agree. A huge part of good NTR for me is the dialogue between the couple
 

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It's great, it has many strengths, but it has one problem: the dialogues between the husband and the wife are not enough, This has made the relationship between them not deep (the player has such an understanding and feeling). If the relationship between them was deep, the scenes of NTR and Share would have been more enjoyable.
I agree. A huge part of good NTR for me is the dialogue between the couple
Hi, can you both elaborate on this. What would you like to see to make it more deep? (examples if possible).
 
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fbass

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Hi, can you both elaborate on this. What would you like to see to make it more deep? (examples if possible).
For me it could be some conversation building up to the event (sharing) and a little after, maybe she gives him a hj while talking about it.
 
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Hi, can you both elaborate on this. What would you like to see to make it more deep? (examples if possible).
Increase the love between the two, when the relationship is not deep, it is like seeing sex between two strangers, but the deeper the relationship, the more the feeling of NTR, you can do this by increasing the romance dialogues and events between husband and wife

in sharing and cheating and similar, use teasing elements a lot. It can be done by comparing the size of the dick or the performance in bed or the amount of handsomeness, etc.

Make the issues bigger, I don't mean to the extent of manga and manhwa that traumatize the reader, but to an average level, for example, when betrayal happens, both the husband will be upset (he won't forgive her soon) and the wife will regret it (she will feel guilty for a while)

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The things I wrote above are some of the basis of the concept of NTR, they all exist in this great game to some extent, but when more attention is paid to them, this game will certainly be much better.
 
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I got an error in kayla questline when i tried to enter the club
Error: <<if>>: <<else>> must be the final clause<<if $kaylaevent1pos is "true" and $bradsmum1 is "false">>
<div class="general">You enter the club you see lot of young girls and guys dancing and talking, the music is very loud.</div>
<<speech "Player" "$name">><i>Let's see if we can find Brads mum.</i><</speech>>
<div class="talkplayer"><span class="playerlink">[[Look around->bradmum1a]]</span></div>

<<elseif $kaylaevent1neg is "true" and $bradsmum1 is "false">>
<div class="general">You enter the club you see lot of young girls and guys dancing and talking, the music is very loud.</div>
<<speech "Player" "$name">><i>Let's see if we can find Brads mum.</i><</speech>>
<div class="talkplayer"><span class="playerlink">[[Look around->bradmum1a]]</span></div>

<<elseif $trapscene is "false">>>>
<div class="general">You enter the club you see lot of young girls and guys dancing and talking, the music is very loud.</div>
<<speech "Player" "$name">><i>Maybe I am too old for this.</i><</speech>>
<div class="talkplayer"><span class="playerlink">[[Let's get a drink->nightclubinside2]]</span></div>

<<else>>
<<elseif $trapscene is "false">>>>
<div class="general">You enter the club you see lot of young girls and guys dancing and talking, the music is very loud.</div>
<<speech "Player" "$name">><i>Maybe I am too old for this.</i><</speech>>
<a data-passage="center"><div class="talkloc">Let’s go somewhere else</div></a>
<</if>>
 
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Exhibitionist 2 Relation over 200 Complete Exhibitionist event, bdsm2 event. Bedroom on the weekend in the morning Ask her to do something today. Sexclub 1 Ask Sarah to go on a date (pool + livingroom in the weekend). Requires the neighbour line to be completed.
Does it work? I can't unlock it
 

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I got an error in kayla questline when i tried to enter the club
Error: <<if>>: <<else>> must be the final clause<<if $kaylaevent1pos is "true" and $bradsmum1 is "false">>
<div class="general">You enter the club you see lot of young girls and guys dancing and talking, the music is very loud.</div>
<<speech "Player" "$name">><i>Let's see if we can find Brads mum.</i><</speech>>
<div class="talkplayer"><span class="playerlink">[[Look around->bradmum1a]]</span></div>

<<elseif $kaylaevent1neg is "true" and $bradsmum1 is "false">>
<div class="general">You enter the club you see lot of young girls and guys dancing and talking, the music is very loud.</div>
<<speech "Player" "$name">><i>Let's see if we can find Brads mum.</i><</speech>>
<div class="talkplayer"><span class="playerlink">[[Look around->bradmum1a]]</span></div>

<<elseif $trapscene is "false">>>>
<div class="general">You enter the club you see lot of young girls and guys dancing and talking, the music is very loud.</div>
<<speech "Player" "$name">><i>Maybe I am too old for this.</i><</speech>>
<div class="talkplayer"><span class="playerlink">[[Let's get a drink->nightclubinside2]]</span></div>

<<else>>
<<elseif $trapscene is "false">>>>
<div class="general">You enter the club you see lot of young girls and guys dancing and talking, the music is very loud.</div>
<<speech "Player" "$name">><i>Maybe I am too old for this.</i><</speech>>
<a data-passage="center"><div class="talkloc">Let’s go somewhere else</div></a>
<</if>>
The error explains itself pretty well, just cut and paste the last "<<else>>" in the code you provided to the line before "<</if>>". Hence making it the final clause. Should fix itself afterwards. Provided that it's the part of the code that's malfunctioning. Make a backup of the html file before trying it out.

It should be:
Code:
...
<<elseif $trapscene is "false">>>>
<div class="general">You enter the club you see lot of young girls and guys dancing and talking, the music is very loud.</div>
<<speech "Player" "$name">><i>Maybe I am too old for this.</i><</speech>>
<a data-passage="center"><div class="talkloc">Let’s go somewhere else</div></a>

<<else>>
<</if>>
I haven't tried it, not playing. Hopefully it works for you guys.
 
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Are there any other scenes after " Well, Sarah went all the way with her daddy / our neighbour. While telling the story she gave me a blowjob and I ended filling her up for the second time. " ?
 
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