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Bro you're wrong, and not just because you're forgetting that the outfits are very similar as well. Go look at Crow's armor, it's stylized to look like a black bird. So no, Crow isn't what 6.5F bros call her, it's what she calls herself.Not...going to touch the top bit so I'll only quote the bottom dealing with the Swan crow story. Want to point out I feel there are several things you are missing. "Crow" is not crow's name, that the name the monks refer to her as so because of her armor. So to say they should make the connection, "She calls herself doctor Swan, we decided to call our enemy Crow? Bird of a Femdom they are in on it!" Seems a little unfair, as they could have named her "Black armor lady."
Wrong.As for not noticing body type see above, "Crow" is covered head to toe in armor so they can't tell from that.
Also the body-type thing was me entertaining a theory that I don't subscribe to, it's not central to what I was saying really.
You don't understand, they shouldn't be distrusting Swan, they should be pretty much certain that she works for the baddies if they had more than one braincell, that's how obvious it is. Besides red-haired guy and Ethan's reason for distrusting her has nothing to do with her name and outfit, which are the obvious giveaways.As for calling them dumb for all trusting swan are they? I only encountered one guy who already drank the cool aid with her, with the red hair guy at the bottom not trusting her in the least, and Ethan swapping back and forth.
I don't have anything against that dynamic, I just think it's rich we hear stuff about Koda wanting the story to stay consistent and flow well together and then get this plot. I already proposed a way of fixing 6.5F's plot, and I just came up with an even EASIER fix than the last one I thought of.I'm...not really sure why you are so against the Swan and Crow story. I personally think the dynamic of double wardens of differing personalities is a unique twist on things. To push the bird metaphor farther, it seems the crow scared the boys into a cage and the swan is there to make it a 'gilded cage' they choose to reside in.
Have Ethan/6.5F boys acknowledge that it's a pretty huge coincidence that Swan and Crow have very similar nicknames and outfits, but then make them think something along the lines of "Nah, there's no way they'd be stupid enough to be working together in secret with aliases and themes that are so obviously connected, it's probably just a coincidence". Now the boys aren't completely braindead and the stupidity being highlighted is Swan's and Crow's, but at least the story makes sense this way. Ta-dah! Easy fix that doesn't require them to rework anything, just add a single line of dialogue, unlike what Koda's doing to 7F presumably...
Sylph Phoenix think you can get Koda to implement it?
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