Agreed, it was fine. Nothing special. I think he should just focus on TA and then do a prequel. Lester is too good of a character to be left alone. I want to hear about his previous exploits. Or if he doesn't want to dedicate a whole other series to it, then include some more backstory within TA. I want to know about his relationship with Lizzie.
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Some Thought on DS work lately:
- Lester-Sarah sex is becoming boring and maybe the less interesting part of the story right now. To me DS should concentrate on the story unfolding and wrap up to the end. It will continue in this way instead because people is continuing to pay. It will be a waste of a potentially incredible story.
- Undercover hasn’t given me any vibe, he should drop it
- NE has potential and up to now had a good pace and unfolding, I hope he won’t ruin it.
- Cash and Otis have a great potential with the suitable story scenario
- Lester-Sarah sex is becoming boring and maybe the less interesting part of the story right now. To me DS should concentrate on the story unfolding and wrap up to the end. It will continue in this way instead because people is continuing to pay. It will be a waste of a potentially incredible story.
- Undercover hasn’t given me any vibe, he should drop it
- NE has potential and up to now had a good pace and unfolding, I hope he won’t ruin it.
- Cash and Otis have a great potential with the suitable story scenario
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Anyone have Antarctica77’s Behind the Neighbor’s Door part 2 and 3. Read Part 1 on literotica and thought it was interesting.
Yeah, I read that too and went to Kemono and realized he hasn't been updated there since November. Any help on further chapters would be deeply appreciated.
A grasshopper jumps once, jumps twice, gets stuck the third time and falls into the palm of the hand.
And that's exactly the ending that awaits Lester (that dirty son of a bitch and criminal scoundrel).
He will bounce for a while until he is taken out of circulation by Dan and pays double and triple for everything he has done
to him, including getting a baseball bat up his arse....
The writer (DS) will continue to let Lester play the wild card and ignore and demote Dan as long as the money keeps flowing
from his "young" well, but it won't last forever.
Dan's comeback will have dire consequences for Lester.
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Predictions for upcoming chapter? This is the one I've felt least sure about. Anything could happen on this one. Hope DS keeps the hospital/Jesse drama to a minimum. Let's get the big 3 back to Chicago together
With a night spent together with Lester and Sarah, while Dan listens next door...
Yes. They arrive in Chicago and Dan pours his heart out to Sarah and she placates him and after he falls asleep she goes to Lester and spends the night. He wakes up and realizes
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That's devious .
Lef this chapter be where the emotional cheating truly starts .her mind drifting to Lester while Dan is talking ,she being unable to provide the emotional support he needs and vice versa
knowing you can't rely on your wife /best friend no more + the fact that shes having the best sex of her life while you are in doldrums can be truly toxic
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can anyone share part 2 & 3. please
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Anyone see this? Kinda similar to DS but better writing IMO.
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Here's part 2 if someone else can share part 3.
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Verisimilinude
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You'll want to remove this and post a link to it thru a media sharing site, before the admins see it.
I know this is the Toxic Attraction DonSilver thread but are there any authors besides Antarctica77 you guys like? Or any other similar Patreons?
I only had the chance to read the 27th chapter today.
Right at the beginning, I felt really sick when I imagined this antisocial, dirty fetwamp Lester sitting in his rubbish dump and choking down his fast food like a piglet.
I wondered what some readers were imagining when they demanded/wrote that Sarah should give up everything and fall in love with this creature and show it publicly by saying ‘I love you, Lester’.
Luckily she is not blind and unlike many others has good eyesight and common sense.
She literally has Lester wrapped around her little finger and is using him to her own advantage, and when his time is up, she will throw him away like used toilet paper.
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Right at the beginning, I felt really sick when I imagined this antisocial, dirty fetwamp Lester sitting in his rubbish dump and choking down his fast food like a piglet.
I wondered what some readers were imagining when they demanded/wrote that Sarah should give up everything and fall in love with this creature and show it publicly by saying ‘I love you, Lester’.
Luckily she is not blind and unlike many others has good eyesight and common sense.
She literally has Lester wrapped around her little finger and is using him to her own advantage, and when his time is up, she will throw him away like used toilet paper.
-PC
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Her own advantage? Lol she's dependant on him for her income and her husband's rent. He doesn't need that job and can easily quit and ruin her life and go back to Chicago. She's addicted to that disgusting smell of his. Idk what story you've been readiy
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Not trying to be a buzz kill. You can still post a link to it so others can download it, the site just doesn't want the material hosted on their platform.
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I didn't mean that to come across in a bad way! Appreciate you looking out for my account haha.