Verisimilinude
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You lost me on this one. Both sets of parents live local to Middleton, because they've both babysat the kids. So why would she be picking them up at the airport?
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I disliked the last act of this chapter so much lol
Me too.
I'll let people read it before giving more detailed thoughts.
I'll let people read it before giving more detailed thoughts.
lol. Thirty chapters in and we now have 3 new charters. This will never end
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The year is 2089. Toxic Attraction is on chapter 673. Sarah has been fucked by every single man on planet earth while Dan pinches his nose muttering 'pineapple' like a mental patient. It is rumored Lester will get Sarah pregnant in the next 500 chapters
Have to agree with you that this is the way this story is going. Disappointing, to say the least.
Can't understand the movie theater..no sense.drugbing Sarah..not into it..opening scene.was greatdinner ok...should have had Lester in dominating mode at apartment and completely finish the night taken Sarah anallthis would complete Lester's control..
I think the Tricia angle is interesting.
More characters, more meaningful sex scenes. This story is seriously devolving into generic cuckold/whore slop. Last chapter was great because of the dynamics between the three foundational characters. How he goes from that intimacy to Sarah in a porn shop getting fucked by strangers we'll never see again is baffling.
Ive given up on this story. I don't think he can resist the incentive to pander to his subscribers. I'll still read because I've invested in how it ends but I've lost hope that the rest will stand up to the genuinely incredible concept he had. Just hope we get NE4 soon
Ive given up on this story. I don't think he can resist the incentive to pander to his subscribers. I'll still read because I've invested in how it ends but I've lost hope that the rest will stand up to the genuinely incredible concept he had. Just hope we get NE4 soon
Yeah Tricia stated her intentions quite clearly towards Dan.
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Completely forgot to comment on that.
Drugs used this way is such a turn-off. Just say she is in too deep in her lust she lost track of the time, man.
I will wait for the final version before criticizing too much, though.
Verisimilinude
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I'll add that I too didn't really care for the theater scene, however I don't think it's pandering to his patron's (I'll get to that). The concept of the scene was an important one but personally I would have preferred a different setting.
It served many psychological purposes for the 3 MCs.
- 3some: It showed for Sarah once again that, what she wanted, Lester could provide for her in a far better way than Dan ever could. “You wanted more than one cock. Dan couldn’t deliver but Lester does.”
- It deepened Sarah's exhibitionistic kink.
- For Lester it achieved quite a few of his goals;
1) he got Sarah to admit that he was her boyfriend and that her pussy was under his control. “He’s my boyfriend,” Sarah said, “It’s his pussy.”
2) it reinforced for Sarah that Lester was only going to share her by his rules, that he wasn't Dan and wouldn't let her run wild
3) it fueled his taunting and humiliations of Dan--it was Lester who suggested for Sarah to call Dan--and Dan had to witness all of the above.
I'm intrigued by the subtext of the dinner scene and some of the nods that Renee might be the dominant in her marriage and a possible hotwife. “It’s a wonder she hasn’t found a paramour.”
As for Tricia I much prefer reading about her seducing Dan than reading about the background of TLG or SS companies. I do think it would be a dark irony if Tricia does seduce Dan, he wakes up and realizes he lost Sarah, marries Tricia and then finds out she is into some twisted shit that would make even Sarah blush.
30 chapters in and this story seems like it ain't goin know where fast that theater scene was like the dream she had now she really ain't nuthin but a slut so I don't know where this story gonna go but I been reading it from the start I'm gonna ride it out all yea by
Maybe I’m in the minority here but I liked it. The crux of the story is Lester corrupting Sarah to the extent that she debases herself and I find that hot for a married (previously) committed mother.